 Agatsuma Ritsuka 2009-09-19 . chapter 1-turns to Roy-
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.Man **. |
 Ria442 2008-10-29 . chapter 1Great story...write more if ya can! |
 kira-chan's imagination 2008-09-22 . chapter 1aw! this was so amazing!! you're a wonderful writer.. and these are such great characters to write about. ^_^ loved it! |
 xMysterious Darknessx 2008-09-03 . chapter 1Wow I loved this!! It was so freakin hot and realistic at the same time! I love how you included Roy too, heh, that was pretty funny. And in addition to the greatness of this story, your such an awesome writer! I hope you plan on writing more! Sincerely,
xMysterious Darknessx |
 sh 2008-08-18 . chapter 1 wow impressive:D best i've read so far |
 hananiji 2008-08-07 . chapter 1Amazing job!! Adorable |
 SonofLuffy 2008-07-31 . chapter 1awsome story |
 SutaakiHitori 2008-07-10 . chapter 1aw... that was cute... Mustang that pervert! al and ed together are so cute!! |
 Zenna Jahan Skyfyre 2008-07-02 . chapter 1Hahahahah i love the mustang thing! LOL! i dont really go for edxal stuff but that was really good. and really funny. |
 Xpectashauns 2008-07-02 . chapter 1Yay! A happy ending! I loved your story |
 Ridley160 2008-06-30 . chapter 1Wow that was incredibly sexy, I loved every minute of it. Short, sweet, and to the point. |
 FMA-SN-Fan 2008-06-30 . chapter 1all i can say is OH MY GOD! that was an awesome story |