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LCHime
2008-07-31 . chapter 24
Amazing chapter and i want LC to kick Y2J's **! Can't wait for the next story i know it has to do with edge, trish and randy right?
DarkenMystery
2008-07-31 . chapter 24
Aww... Yay! It is amazing how much I needed to hear that chapter. I think I needed that more than most things right now. Thank you.

Edge is going to be a Godfather? Too cute!
LCHime
2008-07-30 . chapter 23
NO NO NO NO NO NO BREAK UPS AT ALL! LC sad now sighs till she watches shawn/hunter love.
Zadok
2008-07-30 . chapter 23
what a fantastic chapter, this one was a laugh-a-minute funny from Stephanie and Amy's strugglimh to get the leftover pancakes to the "Shawn was here" note on Amy's butt.

it also had some bleak moments, like aurora crying everytime Hunter holds her, to the Hunter's little anouncment about him and Joanie
DarkenMystery
2008-07-30 . chapter 23
Cheyenne heard! or did she hear something else?
Can't wait to keep reading!
DarkenMystery
2008-07-29 . chapter 22
Amazing! So cute and so sad! Great job!
LCHime
2008-07-29 . chapter 22
oh great chapter hey want to know a secret? I have the same birthday as Cheyenne
DarkenMystery
2008-07-28 . chapter 21
Wow. That was crazy. You truly are a talented writer!
LCHime
2008-07-28 . chapter 21
Whew glad that is over but i wonder what will happen next?
Zadok
2008-07-28 . chapter 21
another fantastic chapter. even though Rex was clearly evil I enjoyed seeing Rex and Ruby duke it out like the WWE superstars.
Poor Hunter he's like a drug-user coming down from the high brought on by a drug and he has no earthly idea of what he's done, in the next chapter be sure to have shawn explain to Hunter some of the Horrible ideas he came up with while he was under Rex's control, it'll be intresting reading about his reaction.

Not suprisingly I have no sympathy at all for Chyna, I wouldn't wish bad on her but if something like Hunter deciding he can't trust her or he can't forgive her happens I wouldn't be able to say I blame him

On a side note I had been hoping that LC wouldn't have to destroy Rex, because after seeing what they did with Ruby I had a ton of ideas about how cool Rex would've been if he had gotten a second chance like Ruby
Zadok
2008-07-25 . chapter 20
woah what a ride i'm not the least bit suprised by A) Amy loving the ride to NY, B) Aurora lighting up at the sight of Jeff or C) Jeff Swantoning on Randy, what an entrance
AND
Finaly Chyna has come to her senses. but now that last statement about Ro-Ro looking for a replacement has me worried
DarkenMystery
2008-07-25 . chapter 20
Love it! Aurora wants to replace H with Jeff? Say what? H won't be too happy!
LCHime
2008-07-25 . chapter 20
this chapter made me cry while listening to aeris theme from FF7 and it was the piano verison i can't wait to see what happens next btw today's date is the 4 year anniversery of me and russ dating
Zadok
2008-07-24 . chapter 19
wow dude that was positivly nerve racking. I was sure that Hunter was a deadman. I loved how Ruby took command and stopped things from getting way out of hand. and Rex telling Hunter that verse and Hunter taking it out of context was quite an eye opener, that sorta thing happens all the time and radical people that claim to be christians often take Gods word and pervert it to fit thier message that is so often not what God says

I noticed another possible Error: when Hunter says "I it cannot be destroyed" was that supposed to be "and I say it cannot be destroyed" or what


P.S. I still hate how in Golden Earrings you took Michelle McCool and had her to be the one to go to Hell because I was checking and in a new addition to the Diva section they answer different questions like favorite book, favorite song. and Michelle said her favorite book was The Bible and her favorite song was "Voice of Truth" by Casting Crowns. So I was wondering would this revelation(that she is clearly a God Loving Christian) be enough to convince you to try to bring her back even though she was sent to Hell for trying to force Mark to leave his wife and trying to kill Sara Calloway
Zadok
2008-07-24 . chapter 18
oh man I thought that Ruby was finally gonna break Rex's hold on Hunter's mind. I just hope that Jeff knows what he's doing and that when Hunter finally snaps out of he goes easy on Chyna(not so much the same for Jericho, I hope he pays for his mistakes 10 times over)
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