Reviews for Cerulean Middle School

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bluejay511 2008-08-20 ch 12,	abuseAww. I knew Ash would come. Yay! Cute chapter! Loved it!
KaterinaBeloved 2008-08-15 ch 11,	abuseOH!! I swear to BOB that Ash was gonna be there!! >.< Man I was so upset...poor misty, where is ash?! I feel like I havent seen him in FOREVER! AND, this story makes me hate Rudy's guts, even though I never minded him b4, plus think about all the guys that hit on misty during the Orange Islands saga...okay maybe only two but I mean compared to the other regions you get zilch. There was Rudy and that random other dude, whose name I can not remember due to the fact that he's not important, he was all old and everything too, I bet he was one of them sex predators, Mmhmm...I could see it in his eyes...o.O
bluejay511 2008-08-14 ch 11,	abuseOMG! Why is Rudy there? OMG! That was the last person i was expecting. I don't know why though. Loved the story! Can't wait 4 the next chapter.
KaterinaBeloved 2008-08-04 ch 10,	abuseI wish I had pizza but no, lol I'll be waiting on that next update and is it just me or did your chapters get longer,WOAH. What's up withMisty and Ash huh? hmm...camp, I wish I could go to camp but again no. I'm at home on fanfiction reviwing AAML stories at 10:45 P.M.(OMG I sound like I have no life!! O.O) I d have a life! Just not now...ignore me.-.-
bluejay511 2008-08-03 ch 10,	abuseOMG!! I can't believe she got out for a week. Thiswas so cute. Ash was so worried. Aw!
ThyOtherSide 2008-08-03 ch 10,	abuseHaha another great chapter! Oh and thanks for the kayak info! I googled sum hot spots for kayaking and found the Hudson River as a good one haha and wow 26" pizza?!?! That's longer than the width of my door lol anyways another amazing job and keep the chappies coming!! P.S. : good luck with the new house!! God it took me forever to settle into my once new house haha
KaterinaBeloved 2008-07-30 ch 9,	abuseWoW! Your life is HECTIC! I hope Misty doesn't die or anything...that's pretty stupid she's not gonna die! Pfft! Me and my thoughts...she doesn't right??
ThyOtherSide 2008-07-28 ch 9,	abuseAnother great chappy and nice details with Misty. You really brought her out and gave her such strong emotion and character! Amazing job and plz keep writing! P.S.: very interesting author notes lol wow I've never been kayacking before haha how's it like? Would u recommend me spending bout 100 bucks for a rental kayak?
bluejay511 2008-07-28 ch 9,	abuseOMG! I didn't think it was going to be him. I thought it was Ash. OMG! I wonder what happen. I would be soo mad if he druged her. loved the chapter!! ^_^
ThyOtherSide 2008-07-24 ch 8,	abuseAwesome chapter! You REALLY brought out Misty from the text and made her a figment of my imagination haha what I don't appreciate is another cliffy lol. Great job and plz keep writing!! P.S: The mysterious stranger is most probably her ex haha can't wait 4 more.. now on to ur recent AAML oneshot haha
bluejay511 2008-07-23 ch 8,	abuseI was like OMG!! My mouth is still open from the surprise. OMG! Why do you do this to me? So many cliffys. OMG! Why don't people use the front door anymore. LOL! Just kidding! can't wait for the next chapter.
KaterinaBeloved 2008-07-23 ch 8,	abuseThat's Ash right?! AH! IT better be ASH!
KaterinaBeloved 2008-07-19 ch 7,	abuseOf course an interuption, Erica's story is really sadd...It's Gary right?? HA HA Ritchie's ALL ALONE! :)
ThyOtherSide 2008-07-19 ch 7,	abuseAwesome story so far! The plot and story is quite intriguing and it flows pretty nicely. The only thing I recommend to you is to slow down a little and give more details. For example, when Erica revealed that she was the survivor of that accident, you could of described her face, tears that were rolling down her cheeks, her eyes, etc. Try to bring out more emotions from the characters as well as their personalities (ex. Ritchie) and you will have an awesome story. Otherwise, good job and keep writing! Can't wait for what happens next! haha
bluejay511 2008-07-18 ch 7,	abuseOMG! I can't believe what just happend. Wht did you leave a cliffy. OMG! I love it. Can't wait for the next one!

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