Loved it! I like how you wrote all the characters and that it didn't have a real sappy ending. great job =D

You write so well, I'm jealous.
Anyways, I like how your stories are realistic, and all of the nice metaphors and all.

This is so beautiful! It causes some soft, bittersweet heartache. Lovely story...

i, like, liek it and stuff. also, wow. mmf. yeah. good stuff.

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D
I lurve this.

The but at the beginning about suns...
Grown up Naru and Sasu...
The smell of woodsmoke...

*Melts from sheer awesome*

lub lub lub~ i love how you made it more of their deep friendship love aspect than romance, it makes it that much more amazing. except i wish they were younger, like 28. 38 is too weird for me to imagine naruto and sasuke as being :P but awesome job, i loved it ^^

lol just like naruto

this is cool, GO NARUTO FOR BEATING SASUKE UP!

Awe! Sad and cute all at the same time! I loved it, but the part about Naruto keeping Sasuke locked up is a tad creepy i'm not going to lie. But besides that it was an awesome fanfic :D
Ja ne!

Very beautiful :)