|Reviews for Dawn of a New Age|
| JimandArtie4ever 5/13/09 . chapter 1
A great story. Very good.
| RabidReject 7/3/08 . chapter 1
Interesting. More soon.
| WBH21C 7/2/08 . chapter 1
| TheDon1023 7/1/08 . chapter 1
damn thats sad as hell
| stickzx 7/1/08 . chapter 1
You need to read over your work you make very small mistakes that really makes the quality of the story go down.
Also you use your tenses wrong. Instead of "Xander was standing" use "Xander stood". Once you learn to do that it's gravy.
| Bobboky 6/30/08 . chapter 1