haha @ "wiggly screen"...

Dream sequences are fun to do, aren't they? I like this chapter actually. Nice and surreal - and short, which works well in this case. It's a goodly length for this particular piece of action, methinky.

^_^ L.T.

I'm looking forward to seeing where you'll go with this...

I really like this story. I can't wait to read more. ^_^

Did I ever mention by the way? -> I liked your old title for this. I LOVE the new one!

Its great to see a story in which Sisco comes back.

--Ad Astra Per Aspera

Okay so now I want to know "silver starship" in its entirety. ...Don't make me beg (unless you want to throw us a fish as well)... *_*

Cute chapter. I really do like the interaction between especially Sisko and Wena here. Interesting attitude for her mother to have -- reality over fantasy -- always thought that kids especially ought to be encouraged to use their imaginations.

Actually, ignore the above. Am tired from work and in a rather brainless mood right now. Really. I love this. It's great. (would be able to follow it better if you updated more hint hint... Actually ignore that too.)

One wee typo I just noticed. I'm guessing it's "wary of holodecks" rather than "weary..."

hehe. Yay, Pel!! ^_^

Good descriptions. I can see how things would change during the time that he was gone--and the new aliens, WOW! I like them.

Of course, Quark's is still there. It wouldn't be DS9 without the iconic Quark's.

That was heart-wrenching. I could feel Ben's pain while he looked down on the graves of his wife and son. Great work.

I did notice one thing.
->He stared at the stones, his eyes as cold and hard as they were.

Maybe a little rewording might be helpful, like "his eyes were as cold and hard as those stones" or something like that.

Now that's sweet. You have effectively captured what it would feel like to re-introduce yourself after being gone for a century or so.

hehe. KIDDIES pretending to be cats!! Luv it.

Have I mentioned yet that I'm liking this so much? If not, apologies for being so forgetful!! :-p

That's such a lovely idea to have the reunion between Sisko and his daughter. So sweet.

^_^ L.T.

Now, that's more like it. You've done a wonderful job starting what I'm sure will be a well-rounded and complete story about the return of Ben Sisko.

I will be keeping an eye out for updates

Ohh, nice! :) Suppose his children would be great-grandparents by now!

This is an excellent start! Oh boy, is this going to cause such a diplomatic stink! I can't wait to see how it turns out!

This is a good start. Your description of Bajor is vivid and descriptive. I look forward to your update.