HURRY AND ADD THE NEXT ONE!

That was a good story, I'd hope for a sequel even if this was written 5 years ago.

Execllent story. I've read your other digimon fics and they're great too!

I know I R/R'ed before but I printed these out and got chances to look over them so here's my complete review- glad Wizzy got a lot of air time. I put Wizardmon in one of my fics and one reviewer's like "Come on, when's he gonna show up?
Hmmm... when you say "Monologue" I think you mean "prologue." A monologue is this big, long line in a play that a character says. A PROLOGUE is something that happens before the rest of the story. This isn't a flame, just a correction.

And my favorite part of the story? Oh yes. I think I know the answer to that one. What happens to Kitmon before the story. Love the flashabcks. Favorite character: MYOTISMON!(don't believe me? Ream my profile _) Yes, and of course I like the Armor Digivolutions. My favorite is probably either Mantaraymon, Yangmon, Yinmon, or Butterflymon. That'd be cool if those were put in 02.

EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT AND GOOD JOB! Muy bueno! Tres bien! However you say it, your story ROCKS! I loved it and it was practically the best thing I've read. I also like it that you have Myotismon as the villain. He's my favorite digi villain and my second favorite villain (Team Rocket is #1)! Loved those creations and can't wait until next time! I also like Wizardmon! _ I also wrote some digimon stories for with those characters in them but they're different. Anyway I'm rambling here so I g2g. Bye! LOVED THE STORY! _

Very Good!

Great story.I loved 't wait to see more.

What? Wizzie hasn't single-handidly saved the rest of these poor schmuck..er... denizens of Digital Land? Dang! He needs to get a better agent-WIZ IS LEADING MON MATERIAL, GOSH DARN IT!

where was I? Oh yes. Good fic.-P

Nice, the mega's should be interesting. What you do for the mega's of Veemon, Hawkmon, Armadillomon, and Wormmon should be interesting in the story they appear. Good story over all, I like it.

This is great. I can't wait for the next story in the series. I must once again mention the names of the Four Guardians. According to Megchan's Digimon Encyclopedia, Zhuqiaomon's name means red sparrow, and Xuanwumon's name means black turtle. And ebon means black, so if Xuanwumon means black turtle, so does Ebonwumon. I think the makers of the cards goofed, and Ebonwumon is the turtle and Zhuqiaomon is the phoenix. Anyway, I hope we get to know more about Crystal and Zeke. BlackGatomon was cool. And I loved your take on the line from Back To Nature, Back To Battle, about the drink being as strong as Renamon but Renamon having much better packaging. It was hilarious. I can't figure out if that was a pairing hint or not. But whatever it was, it was cute.

Zeke's entrance was a bit too convenient, and they trusted him a little too quickly. But it was still good. Only one chapter to go? Hopefully the end of this story won't be the end of the series.

Chapter 2's even better than Chapter 1. But you have them mislabeled. The first chapter is listed as Part 2, and the second is listed as Part 1.

Good, though I thought Zhuqiaomon was the Guardian of the South. This series is very enjoyable, and Myotismon's a good villain.

Good!

Writte more!

I want to read more that was great.