Rereading C&I fic, now that the announcement of no more Goren & Eames has come through. Love the insight that Goren (finally) has on how important Eames is to him. It would be interesting to see how Eames would accept his newly-found realization. As always, you manage to capture them well. Too bad the show writers could not manage this!

Love your writing and the characters you put on paper. Lovely. And hope things are going well with your dressage pal. . .that is a true partnership! Hope to see more from you as time allows. I have read all of your work, even for series I don't watch, and enjoy it fully!

chris

Aww. This is very poignant. I really hope his thoughts went something like this. Alex needs to know that he respects her and wants her in his life. All of his life. I think he really did realize what she was saying, how he had hurt her. I think he went out of his way to make it up to her and things were better between them by the end. Which is the only upside for Bobby. Considering everything with Declan. *sighs* I hope things are better for them this next season. LOL They've had enough drama the last two years.

Wow! If only the writers could find some way to work this into an upcoming episode. This is a very well written piece.

This story actually made me cry. it is amazingly beautiful and well written and I could actually imagine it happening. It shows the closeness of them without being shippy and...idk. just keep this kind of stuff up!!

OMG! Such an amazing story, I don't even have words for how much I love this. It's just perfect! :) no shippyness (unless you want to see it, and I don't) but at the same time it shows how much Bobby cares for her. I love it! Amazing job! It's perfect.

This was just lovely! You really captured them.

Nice ideas about the ways in which Goren and Eames might restitch their relationship , and as always, well written, good work with Goren's internal 'voice' and I love Logan's line.

You'd think I'd learn to expect this sort of thing from you by now... *sniffles* Damned writers, dragging them and us through the mud...

Okay, so I have to admit that the only reason I'm here is because Alamo Girl threatened to take out my kneecaps if I didn't read this. (I don't read much "CI" fic.)

But, for once in her life (hee), Mel was right on.

Holy CRAP. No, seriously. Dude. DUDE. You broke my brain with this beautiful, lyrical, evocative piece. I think you've captured both a very complex relationship and character here, cocooning it in apparent simplicity and making the reader identify and sympathize with an incomprehensible situation. This whole thing is just ten kinds of gorgeous.

Bravo on a breathtaking job.

Your story was wonderful. I don't review very much or very often, but I LOVED this. I think if it was reality, this captures their relationship so perfectly. Well done.

truly amaizing story. i hope there will be more, but if not, it'll be perfect the way it is right now. and the song - good choice. i just finished watching CI video on youtube on this song and now i'm here reading your story. great minds do think a like.

Ali:)

I love it! The fortune cookie is especially touching.

Wow. Just...wow.

I love the way you worked their normal routines into this...that was great. Nice job. :D

Oh absolute bliss! This is just so perfect. If Bobby really does feel this way, I could forgive him and I'm sure Alex would, too.