great one-shot fic! it brought tears to my eyes!

Ja ne!

OOhh wow very intense. Beautiful. It nearly brought me to tears- wonderful job!

I liked it. You totally captured the essence of the AnC. It's very good, even when I like the Aya/Yuhi pairing better (Go Yuhi!). But this story was perfectly written. Just wanted to make that little comment. _

Daydreamer

Oh this was so sad! I love Yuuhi so much and I felt so bad and mad at the same that Aya ended up with well. still I think Aya should move on , she can always love another guy!

ahhhhhhhhhh so sweet...oh man...its sooooo nice...serious...i really like how you make yuuhi so honourable...and it really flows with the story...its really worth reading..._

that was so nice...you have commited some errors in grammar and spelling in the first part though. but that's not important! the kid has a dumb name. sorry, i just hate that no-surname-freak.

I love this! It's so sad though... Aya and Yuhi belong together. I feel like crying right now...:Grabs tissue box and starts sobbing
This is:sniffs so good. Think maybe you can turn it into a series? Where she falls for him anyways? N/m, you are the author.. ehehe.

Princess Akira

wow. such a beautiful story. you deserve so much praise.
i personally don't agree to the fact that yuuhi loves aya after chidori's death, but still, i must commend you on your awesome writing skills. WOW! it left me breathless. WAY TO GO! it was a marvelous story. I enjoyed reading it. GOOD JOB! i hope you write more.

I can't tell you how much I enjoyed that. I usually don't read fic because it's so bad anymore, and Yuuhi/Aya fics are hard to come by as it is. Man, this was just so right. As much as I want them together, I'm not a fan of mushy stuff. This is a lot like something I would right. Major kudos to you. I adore this!

This piece was terribly sad within my eyes. I thought that it was beautifully written. This soliloquy showed many different conflictions within Yuuhi's thoughts, which is intereting to the reader. The poor guy had to endure suffering to the extent of loving a perosn but yet not having them return that love. It can be one of the hardest thigns in life. To truly love a perosn and not have them return that love.(God only knows I understand) Thats beside the point, but what I mean is that you actually feel for Yuuhi's character, and sympathise with him. Honour is an amazing thing, if you can uphold it, and yuuhi is a prime example of putting his hnor before his needs and wants. It goes to show to be the father of a child, yes it would mean so much to haev a child to call your own, being cut from the same cloth, however to lvoe anohter child of someone else can be hard to accept, it shows that love cna overcome many circumstances and comes in different forms. People tend to mistake love for "making love" which is a pity. Yuuhi makes his sacrafice for the love of a child and most of all the lady that he loves. In all my dear you have written yet another talented piece of work that I truly admire.

WAHHHH! Poor Yuuhi! Seriously, that is so sad! I'm actually crying, and that takes a lot of effort! Awesome fic, write more! MORE! MORE YUUHI/AYA! Screw Tooya! Er... uh... *coughs* Sorry, I dislike him.

Oh...my...god...that was (and im not kidding here) the BEST AnC fic i've EVER read! my friend and i think that Aya and Yuhi should have been 2gether since the beginning...I love it! Poor Yuhi...!

This was really sweet and sad. I was really heart felt. You did a really good job.

*speechless*

wow really nice