I LOVED that ending. Onto the next.

btw - the Art of War by Sun Tzu is about 50 stanzas of Chinese poetry, similar to Haiku. Interestingly it starts with 'The Making of Plans" - Master Sun said 'War is a grave affair of state; it is a place/ of lie and death/ a road/ to survival and extinction/ a matter/ to be pomder carefully.' but ends with 'Espionage' 'Spies/ are a key element/ in warfare/ on them depends/ an armies'/ every move'

small trivia :)

- enjoying the story so far although personally I don't agree with corporal punishment, much less from a teacher.

Nice last line!

What a great story! I like how you've developed Ron's character. Thanks a million for that!

Awesome story! I loved it :)

Thanks for this wonderfully done story. I am looking so forward to reading the sequels.

I really like this story.

CT

Brillant and i love it so much! It's like reading this story in a totally different perspective. :D

I absolutely loved it. Honestly, I couldnt stop laughing...I know that probably sounds bad, especially since there were serious parts, but it's true. The angst and over-reactions of second years is amusing...And imagining Snape in this story is just hilarious.

But yeah. Loved it. Keep up the good work.

Good stuff!

Hee hee! Good explanations. Punishments should be private.

Woot! Well done!

Ron is slow but he does get there in the end.

Woot!! Good choice! I love the bonding moments. Very realistic.

Way to go! Really good sharing for both of you. Good apologies. Well done.