personally, i couldn't take reading this story after the 2nd chap.

the 'general' was just too off-putting. the fic would have probably been better off under the highlander category, not hellsing, since all it really seems to be about is a highlander in hellsing's world.

then you just kinda pulled the plug on alucard power wise it seemed, as well as intimidation wise.

so yeah, good grammar, but the ooc and oc are just not something i want to read.

Good grammar and somewhat interesting story, but your general character turned me off after half the first chapter I'm afraid. Too powerful and perfect, almost a mary sue.

Well that was a fun story. i wonder if your tardis welding general will ever get lost again and meet them. _

I don't in general like OC involved stories, this story was quite riveting however. I loved what I read and hope that you will be able to continue this some time in the near future.

BTW: One reason I think for your lack of reviews is that you posted everything at once. People in general like that, however they are more likely to 'see' that a story is available for reading if there are regular updates as it catches them whenever they happen to check for new stories, instead of being an all or nothing deal on other particular day.

I really like your story so far. There were a few grammatical errors here and there, but other than that it was really good. I've always liked SxOC.