Whe! Do more of this pair Kyouya x Haruhi. I love this pair and I love you for creating such wonderful stories of them!

plz update soon...

It's not really ooc at all. If anything it's prety in character...since truthfully I believe his only flaw is his inabilitly to say something when it matters the most..well say the right thing anyway

This could totally turn into a one sided KyoyaHaruhi thing. I wish you had at least one chapter with them actually together!

he can't help being who he is, and why must he keep on torturing himself...poor guy...geez...

THANKS:"D

love your story. i dont think there is need for more of an explanation
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"... I kept a picture with Haruhi on it, the only picture I had of her and the only picture I wanted." It's in first person instead of third person. :)

Very good.
Even though the chapters are short, I really like that about them.
They always are satisfying.
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I'm looking forward to the next part.

Hey ^.^ I really like this story...but.

The chapters are SO SHORT!

=P That is my only issue ^.^

AWE poor Kyouya..that is so sad, but why does he do that to himself...he doesn't even give himself a running shot w/her...

THANKS:"D

interesting and so sad...poor Kyouya...

THANKS:"D

Hi! :) I really think you should make more stories... and longer ones if I may suggest. I only noticed a couple of errors (probably out of clumsiness) which I think makes you a very promising writer since you seem to have a knack for a good storyline with few or no typographical or grammatical errors. ;) I hope to hear more from you.

oh... I really like this continuation of the first story! great work! Thank you for writing more.

the chapters seem short but great descriptions...

I really really like this.
Keep it up, yes?
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