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| Pae 2008-08-11 ch 12,  | abuseAw, this story was so good! You're excellent at describing fight scenes, which makes up a lot of SSB. I sure hope you continue writing in the SSB world. I haven't seen many people with such talent. *is currently flooding Nintendo with e-mails* I don't care how early it is, I'M STILL WRITING! |
| Komikmaker 2008-08-11 ch 12, | abuseVery epic. I LOVE IT! (Mewtwo for SSB4!) |
| SmashersUnited 2008-08-11 ch 12, | abuseNice story, but the ending was kinda...sudden, abrupt,etc... Other than that, good story. Only one thing bugs me: I got an alert for a chapter 13 of this story...? |
| NinjaSheik 2008-08-11 ch 12, | abuseALRIGHT!LINK AND ZELDA WILL MAKE UP!!BELIEVE IT!!UPDATE SOON!! |
| Emperor K. Rool 2008-08-11 ch 12, | abuseOh, I'm going to send e-mails and snail mails beggeing them to bring Mewtwo back AND add King K. Rool. I like that you've made Link an idiot, and I can easily see Mewtwo and Wolf as friends. |
| Hear of Blades 2008-08-11 ch 12, anon. | abuseHmm, well, I'll addmit it, I'm rather disopointed in the ending...feels like there's just a whole lot more to the story that just got dropped. Oh well, over all I did enjoy it. The character interaction was very pleaseing and I thought the idea was cool. |
| Ri2 2008-08-11 ch 12, anon. | abuseMew's so cute. |
| ghoster88 2008-08-11 ch 12, | abuseA very good story. That ending out by the lake was really cool. The fact that they played music together was awesome. The ending was very abrupt though. If you can't write, you can't write and I totally understand that, it kind of just ended though. Not much of a resolution. How did Mewtwo get hurt? Was it an actual malfunction or sabotage? None the less, good story. |
| Pae 2008-08-09 ch 11, | abuse'Absolute zero suit’, I got a kick outta that one! I also like how Mew suggested 'Clubbed to Death', considering what Mewtwo had been through, rofl! |
| Ri2 2008-08-08 ch 11, anon. | abuseFox and Wolf are...odd. Link got his ** whupped. Awesome. Mew can be very childish, can't she? |
| NinjaSheik 2008-08-08 ch 11, | abuseWell,this is going well!Poor Link and what the heck was that about Zelda fighting Link?!?I hope everything is going to be OK!Believe it!Update soon! |
| Pae 2008-08-05 ch 10, | abuseMy stupid computer won't e-mail me when you post new chapters, so that why I'm late. *kicks computer* Aw, Mewtwo x Mew, so cute! CHAPTER ELEVEN! |
| Ri2 2008-08-04 ch 10, | abuseLucas calls Mewtwo Sensei? That's cute. How DO the Climbers not get superhot wearing those things all the time? Mew and Mewtwo are cute together. Though someone's going to need to fix that door. |
| Komikmaker 2008-08-04 ch 10, | abuseThis is one of my favorite stories! |
| NinjaSheik 2008-08-04 ch 10, | abuseOKTHIS IS FREAKIN' AWSEOME!!PURE AMAZING!!BELIEVE IT!!BUT I FEEL SO SORRY FOR LINK!!I'M...IN...LOVE...WITH...HIM.THERE'S ONLY ONE PERSON WHO CAN HEAL HIS BROKEN HEART.IT'S A GIRL WHO BROKE HIS HEART A WHILE AGO.MIDNA...THE TWILIGHT PRINCESS.THERES ALWAYS SHEIK,TOO,BUT WHAT CAN SHE DO?UPDATE SOON!! |