 HuntressBow 2009-10-18 . chapter 1Hey this is really nice to see a different pairing but isn't Wanda a little too old for Sam?
Also, maybe you'd like to portray Sam as a more demanding person and not so submissive as he seems to be..in the story..Girls like rough guys right haha..Yeah so those are pointers to note :D
I was thinking maybe Sam and Clarice( Blink ) would make a cute couple..haah :D
3/5 for the story! Add oil( chinese for encouragement) for the rest of your stories! |
 ANGLEOZD 2008-07-11 . chapter 1great story I love how you have sam depicted in this. All the little details and how he is so inlove with wanda, I love it. "Brain dying. No air. Oh good Lord, this was gonna be dangerous." lots of little lines like this one just made me smile, and the way you have him being respectable and uncomplictated can't wait until the next one. I just love your writing and the humor and the flow that you have going on in here, tieing in other couples and haveing Sam reflect and then just blurt out what he is thinking |
 Amelia Glitter 2008-07-05 . chapter 1*pokes with stick* You -are- still alive!
Yay!
I -love- this chapter. It's so perfectly Sam. You capture him so well, at least as I see him. And of course, the pairing is fab (Sam/Maximoff forever! Whichever Maximoff that may be!). |
 amura 2008-07-05 . chapter 1i'm so happy you're alive and still writing ;)
hurray, sam! absolutely loved the fic. it was perfect and them and just great! sam's such a sweet guy, i'm glad he didn't get murdered :p
keep up the fantastic work! looking forward to pietro :) |
 DoubleL27 2008-07-01 . chapter 1Oh my dear sweet Sam. So respectful and silly all at once. I was shocked to see this hanging out in my mailbox and very pleased. I enjoy these two together and apart and this was just fantastic. Makes me kind of miss Evo... Anyways, I really enjoyed the dynamics, especially the disaster with Wanda, Sam, Pietro and JP. No one ever quite writes Pietro like you do.
Fabulous dear. |
 Sue Penkivech 2008-07-01 . chapter 1Omg, you're still doing fic!
Sorry, had to say it.
Anyway, that I loved it probably goes without saying. Sam and Wanda are so unlikely a couple that they work. Brilliantly. I don't know how else to explain it, but it's true. The others that technically "should", don't, but - they do.
It's brilliant. Always.
Looking forward to the next one! Always Gotta love Pietro! |
 girlonthem00n 2008-06-30 . chapter 1Well I'll be damned. Just when I had almost given up again and here you are. That was an fantastic chapter. Poor Sam. Always saying the wrong thing. Loved the little bit with JP and the never tell a Maximoff no. Love that your back. Can't wait for Pietros part. |
 Jen 2008-06-30 . chapter 1 Dude! I didn't know you were working on this again! So, so awesome. Seriously. Hilarious and fantastic, per usual. (And yes, that's the best my Percocet-ed brain can come up with right now. |