Awwwwwww how sweeeeet!

this is good. You have talent. Even if you hadn't written for a while, it doesn't really show.

very nice

This story was great! I liked the way you wrote it and portrayed both characters and their own beliefs. Also, the passing of time was a good addition, to show how things changed from 5 years to the next 5 years. The ending was, of course, great and very sweet.

I'm glad you started to write again. I have just recently (well, kind of recently) started reading Yu-Gi-Oh, and I've always loved your stories. I actually think that the first story I read was yours...

Anyway, I really liked this one. The repetition really worked, and drew everything together. Rusty? Psh, you're still amazing. BUT, hopefully you will continue getting less "rusty" by writing more fictions? -raises eyebrow- Please?

Skipper

lilrubydevil! I should've known it was you... I didn't check your name until after I read the story. xD I've read a lot of your stories, you're an excellent authoress, and I don't think you're at all rusty.

Anyway, some old fans are around I see... saw ColeyCarissa reviewed your story. She's been around for awhile too... and so have I. I don't write fanfics anymore sadly enough, I'm hardly ever around. But I've been reading these Yugioh fanfics for about five years now.

Anyway, enough of that. I love this little one-shot. I love how it was done with the "do you believe it signs" and all. Yay for Seto/Katsuya pairings! Heh, you ougtta get into the writing business more often. Write another full length story! I miss those.

Well, keep writing! Glad to see you are still around.

No, this story does not suck badly - It is AWESOME. You made me want to cry.

I really liked how you started each snippit of their life with "Do you believe in signs?" and it was really cool (excuse the lack of words) how you could 'see' their feelings evolve over time.

Lastly, you made them break up. Not only that, Joey initiated it because he didn't feel wanted enough. Go you! XD It was different, you showed that they had problems and everything too - It just made it seem real?

Anyhoo, great story _ Keep writing

- Impawsible.

(No wonder I felt deja-vu when I read this - I have 'Procrastinating Confesstions' under my fav. stories list)

*waves* Hihi! I'm relatively new to the fandom...Been reading YGO fics for about a year, but I only read puppyshipping. _ I REALLY want more fics about these two-no offense to many of the other authors of puppyshipping fics, but many of them seem quite young. _

Wow! So you're back to writing? Thank god! I've been waiting for you to write again and was starting to really miss you! But I am now at peace with this story. Great idea to use!

I'll wait an eternity if it means I get to read another one of your stories!

Sugoi desu neh!

i'm still here. weird. i feel like i should have moved on my now, but no. and for good reason, there are still awesome stories and people. so you should jump back in! this was cute! no really it was. i liked how you wrote it so you mustn't be that rusty eh? hopefully i'll review you later_

Well, well. It has been a while. I remember you used to pop out awesome, amazing Seto/Jou fanfics weekly.

Glad to see you back. Or, at least, glad you've posted something.

I really enjoyed the theme and the repetition of the question. It was very simple and pleasant and I enjoyed it a lot. Good job. If this is rusty, you're doing good.

gem

Yay, you're writing again! I like the fight part the best. :]Keep on writing and don't hog the computer no more, foo. :P

Aw, that was so cute. I loved how they moved on through their lives. And I'm actually glad you didn't stop the story at that first kiss. I'm not sure if I believe in signs, but this fic gives me hope. Great job.

Aw that was sweet! I haven't written or read anything Seto/Jou either in a while. I should fix that... Anyway, it's good to see you back in the fandom!