wow...didnt see that one comeing...

i love the scene in the previous chapter. how i picture the two interacting is so adorable. i just love babies. anyway, why did neji all of a sudden wail, and what is the price that was to be paid in order to have tenten? you must update.

wahahaha why did he cry when he saw hinata

Oh dear, now this is going to be chaos. I wonder if Hinata will be added to their little circle, though I somply can't imagine baby Neji sucking on baby Tenten's shoe, though I can imagine baby Tenten taking off her shoe just so that baby Neji can suck on it. Update!

lol XD oh neji! ahahaha!
this is uber duber cute!

Super-cute story!! Well it is now, but before,it was a bit confuso, and solemn, and sad, but now its totally adorable how they're finding each other again, kawaii!! Anyway, I cant wait to see how this goes, so update soon!!

I liked the little bit where Neji's POV was shown and it was very like you would expect a toddler to think. Also liked Neji's introduction to Hinata and how Hiashi is scared of dropping her and how Neji managed to reunite the twins. Thanks for updating!

Still a beuatiful chapter. You can sense Neji's desperation to be with Tenten once again. As if he is saying the world is not enough, take everything just give her back. So sad too. Love it. :)

That was just wow! Breath taking and so, grotesque, I think would describe it. I'm just really taken aback by it. Wonderful first chapter. I love how you explain what it is to grow up as a shinobi's child. :)

Aw, poor Neji. Doesn't seem to like his new cousin, does he?

Oh, that is so sweet. I have this image of Hizashi and Hiashi together like that :D *sigh* So cute :)

Oh, this is so swett! I love this chapter :D

Very adorable. You capture the innocence of children splendidly.

Neji's jealous that he's not the center of attention anymore. Heehee!

The end of this chapter makes me squeal! It's just so cute!