WOOT! Smexy Axel strips, Roxas tops... what other things do you plan to add to my very avid fantasy life??

I'll treasure those two FOREVER! XD

OMG LOVE IT

strangely lovable of a fic;
myself, i think it's a touch hard to make "**" affectionate, but you do have your readers feeling for axel.
might i ask, because i was exhausted as all hell reading this and was more than likely to have missed key variables: what makes roxas forgive axel? for, you know. pros-ti-tu-tion.

:)
joy to read, hopefully in time, an epilogue will come?

Yayz I hope that there si gona be another chapter but based on your comments aat the bottom of the chapter then i am sure this is and i can't wait !

I have to say that this was one crazy story. I loved the entire ride of it... hopefully Epilogue I will be coming aorund soon. -laughs- Love it. :)

This story is brilliant, I love how you can piece everything together so well. This story is such a distracter lol from my homework x3. But I'm glad I finally got to this chapter. Aw everyone hurts Axel in their fics nowadays. Must be an explanation for his cocky and I-don't-give-a-damn attitude. >< Well I'm happy that you got out of your writer's block. I've been in one for nearly a year now Q_Q It is horrible. Stupid school lol. Anywho enough of my rambling. Great story. Great structure. Great wording. Looking forward to the next update.

I love this story. It was so good! And who doesn't like Akuroku, which just makes it that much better.

However, You said the Epiloque was three parts, so even though what you have right now would be a fine ending, meaning it's barable. I would much apprieciate it if you put up the last part. I want to know what you had planned for an ending.

so... i'm back!! and i am really excited to read tht enext chapter!! smut... *drools* jk. but i like this chapter and i think a stripper pole in their living room would be a good idea... i'd invest in that. haha. so i shall wait here imaptiently for the next chapter, so that i can be away to it!!

oh and personally, i think scarring xiggy like that was insanley awesome!! what a great way to quit a job!! ;)

hmm... secret back doors... to hide the strippers? won't people see their faces anyway if they're einside dancing? awell. anyways, i like this chapter, and i have this sneaking suspicion that axel planned this hole thing out, like roxas' wallet is in his back pocket or something... well i will just have to keep reading and find out now won't i?

gone so fast i was never here...

i wanna be a bartender, that would be fun. wish i would have found this story earlier, i always have good ideas that i refuse to write, they could have come in handy here... awell though, i guess i get to go see what the other reviewers wanted to see... *sigh* but it shall be fun!! ;)

here it goes, here it goes, here it goes again - OK Go, haha

well, this chapter is not what i had expected. i wonder what axel was thinking, getting himself into trouble like this... and seriously, who in the hell takes sleeping pills? drugs are for people with more problems then brain capacity... sometimes. but here i go, about to find out what happens...

gone in a flash

sadistic much? judging by your writing, i would say so, but thats all i have to go by. i wonder whats wrong with axel... it obvioulsy can't be anything good... and now i am off to find out!!

and now i'm gone

hmm... if you're dating supposedly dating people that you've known for three months... i sure am datig alot of people... i like axels logic! ;) but yes, i think it is cute that they are finally dating, you know? about time some real akuroku action decided to make itself known!

onto the next chapter!!

i like strippers... that go buy the name of axel... well now for the next chapter. oh and i rather like the mini chapters, 9t makes me feel like i'm accomplishing something new every thirty seconds or so. ;)

im getting my friends stripper poles for their bachelorette gifts XD sorry just had to say it...
anywho, i think this is a review of the last 2 or 3 chappies... they got buried and i just got around to reading them XD haha but i loved em! and i totally cant wait for the next part! :D