I think you do very well for someone who isn´t English. Love your story!

wow his is a really great story

cool. Plz update. I really like this story.

I really like this story.

Aww, well, best wishes to you. And if you do find someone to finish the story, do post an A/N to let us know. =)

I totally understand what u mean
i loved the books when i first read them
now i can't really stand it so i read fanfic's that are totally OOC
i do hope someone tries to pick up your FF cause i did enjoy reading it.

xox,
Millz

Wow, this was a great first chapter! I didn't see many mistakes, your writing is pretty good in my opinion :)
I have some german friends, and sometimes they slip in english grammar, so don't worry! :D

I wished I could write... hopefully someone will want to pick this story up. Thanks for letting us know you're done. Also will you please let us know if someone does want to continue this story?

I totally get it, and I love reading fanfics but I do get what you mean by losing intrest in the book you based the fanfic off of!

I hope you could find somebody who does want ot continue the story though...

This is a total shame, as i loved this story.
But if you feel you dont want to write it anymore i wish you the best :]
And look forward to any more future stories. I myself can't actually stand the books. I loved them when i first read them but hate them now.
Have fun with future reading ;]

i love this story please update on it already it like totally rocks:)

cant wait to see what happens i hope you finish it!

omg omg omg the suspense is killing me she has to tell edward but isnt jasper going to be with alice it only makes sense.

this is like an amazing story..i think you should finish it..afterall who doesnt want to see jasper and alice!

oh my good plis tell me that you are going to update these fic cause ohh my good i never saw jasper doing that i just thought alice and jasper but wow that cliffhanger wow i jjust cant wait 4 more