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luvtwilight14
2009-12-01 . chapter 7
Great ending. I hate that Edward died, but I am glad that it ended well. Great job!

S.
luvtwilight14
2009-12-01 . chapter 3
That's the second time in your author's note that you apologize for the Jacob and Bella pairing. That is the main reason I found your story and why I'm reading. Don't apologize. Alot of people like the pairing as long as he gets his happily ever after. I kinda see the meaning of the song in this, but I hope I havent figured out what is to happen. I also see the titles of your chpts. and now I'm scared. We will see what happens.
Tianna M.V.A.
2008-12-15 . chapter 7
This was a really sad story. Really. It almost made me cry. But I wish you didnt have to kill Edward... although that would have happened eventually...
Obsessed.with.writing
2008-12-15 . chapter 7
Tears again. Also, I have things to tell you.
Obsessed.with.writing
2008-12-15 . chapter 6
I love it.
Obsessed.with.writing
2008-10-20 . chapter 5
I remember a while ago when I put an A.N. on all my open stories and you reviewed them all, so I must review too! Lol.
BloodyLittleMinx
2008-09-14 . chapter 4
This was a great chapter, I loved it and I love the song.
Sk8rChick2355
2008-09-10 . chapter 4
great job!


Obsessed.with.writing
2008-09-09 . chapter 4
Ok you don't deserve 14 year olds throwing bark at you because you've already had that. This was fantastic. I felt pain when she felt pain.
BloodyLittleMinx
2008-07-25 . chapter 3
This was a great chapter and I can't wait to read more of this story!
Sk8rChick2355
2008-07-13 . chapter 3
nicee



Obsessed.with.writing
2008-07-10 . chapter 3
Ok question, why did you include a thing to say that I'm the best beta ever when I didn't beta this? It was amazing by the way. I need more loo roll. I'm sick, again!
BloodyLittleMinx
2008-07-08 . chapter 2
I can't wait to see where this is going to go! Plus, I've flung pens with rubberbands too (But I hit my teacher in the back, he was **)
Sk8rChick2355
2008-07-05 . chapter 2
ughh! i never really liked jacob but if its needed for the story...*cry my eyes out!*

so r jacob and bella married?

well wite more! noww!

Obsessed.with.writing
2008-07-04 . chapter 2
Lol I love it. Heehee fire extinguisher (I can't spell)
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