Reviews for Too Many Faces
TheWordFountain 9/8/08 . chapter 1
WOW. I've heard so much about this fic and I can definitely see what all the hype is about!

It's great how you had all the shapes and mentioned their number of faces, showing her emotions when she thinks of each one and how they all incorporated with her name/nicknames. Just wonderful!
ebdarcy.qt4good 8/28/08 . chapter 1
Reflective, and nicely written.
ick.toriavay 8/27/08 . chapter 1
This was beautiful. It was completely original, and cute. I like the faces. You did excellent.
Moge 8/17/08 . chapter 1
wow! that was inspiring!

love how she's so insecure of herself and the imagrey to shape at the beginning. that made me smile... :) -Moge..x
Certain Velocity 8/10/08 . chapter 1
That was cool.

I always wondered what she orignaly looked like, though acording to some people, she started metamorfing a birth.
Islander2 8/9/08 . chapter 1
WOW, this is a good story! First off, the premise is great: Tonks has too many faces. It's mainly a psychological premise, but not one many people explore. Next off, it's intuitive. You get Tonks' feelings down exactly, and she's as round a character as is possible in a 600-word story. Then your structure is perfect, along with your grammar. This story is easy to read and has no typos (at least, none that I caught, and I have a pretty critical eye). It's a very short, low-profile one-shot, but a perfectly-executed one. I give this a 10/10-best one-shot I've come across in a while!
digigirl02 8/8/08 . chapter 1
Nice fic.
Jadeannx 8/5/08 . chapter 1
That was one fabulous piece of writing that gave me an inside into the seemingly troubled life of Nympha'dora' Tonks. Thank you. I really enjoyed it and thought it was very origional. Well done.
Shaped-like-pi 8/2/08 . chapter 1
Someone who had all the faces she wanted, someone who wasn't any of them, someone who wanted to find the real one; the real her, amazing, simply amazing.

Gimpy
violet-phoenix-rose 7/25/08 . chapter 1
Beautiful. When's this set?
Kore-of-Myth 7/6/08 . chapter 1
Oh, but who is she? Poor her who never new...(yes, I'm refraining from naming her...)

Keep Writing!
sinfulgirl 7/5/08 . chapter 1
This was really great. Seriously, I loved it. No critisicm whatsoever.

All the best...
toffeecakesxox 7/4/08 . chapter 1
This is verryy Tonks-y! Great job! I love it! :D
EHWIES 7/2/08 . chapter 1
Very poignant; in particular, you had a very effective introduction to this that really caught my attention. Well done!
Lexie-H 7/2/08 . chapter 1
I LOVE this. The idea is simple, and it carries well through the story. You haven't overcomplicated it with dialogue, and ... I love the originality, too. The different facets of her character are fascinating, and I think you've absolutely done justice to her character here. Really well done.

Stylistically, I also like the little asides, in the brackets - it works really well to undercut the general tone of the piece).

Very impressed. I'm adding this to the Reviews Lounge archive in the hope it will grab this some more attention )

Lexie
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