plz update, i love this story so far!

Wow. This was a really good, in-depth story. Nightshade is a really cool OC (as I already said in Vapour Trails) and I loved her interactions with her 'brothers'. Had Rumble kept going on, I have a feeling he would have been blasted into a million little pieces. The banter with Frenzy and Rumble was pretty accurate I suppose between kind-of siblings who aren't exactly...moral with their relationships. I do wish Soundwave had said something earlier though...before Megatron had decided to...claim her I suppose, territorial idiot bot (although reading what was going on in his head was fascinating, and I'd say surprisingly accurate. I still think he's delusional, but he's a really well laid out character, especially in this fic. Will more of Nightshade's relationship with Soundwave be laid out in Vapour Trails?

cool

Wow, this is fantastic! *squeals* I've been searching for some well written fanfics about Megatron-related-pairing for a long time and seeing this fic lit up my eyes immediately. You describe the Decepticon feast so well - the lust, the greedy thoughts and the relationships are wonderfully depicted, which made this story darker yet awesome beyond words. The Deceptions' thoughts and behavior fit their `Con characters exactly, all the descriptions are so vivid... And I love how you described Megatron - a typical type of villain, yet still deadly charming.

Hope to see the update soon! I love your fic very much, this fic is extremely amazing!

Wow O_O

I really, really liked this. Your description of all the femmes in the Decepticon ranks was great! And the last scene with Rumble & Nightshade was one of the best I've read in a while :thumbs up:

Can't wait for more! ;D

- chimeraone

Hell yes you better continue this! You've got me well and truely hooked, another fine story from you!

Hm...if I were in Nightshade's position right now...I probably would have melted...

Update soon please.

Oh WOW! This turned out simply magnificently! So beautiful!

The descriptions at the beginning with all the different femmes may have been a bit cumbersome still, but I'm glad that you didn't streamline it too much- I truly enjoyed seeing your rendition of all those Decepticon femmes. Reading about your version of Flamewar and seeing the real Nightshade as you would have her in action is a real treat! Going into all those different femmes was a lot of fun- hearing about Fracture, Blackarachnia, the Rainmakers, and Thinderblast was refreshing and an excellent reminder that the 'Cons really do have their own dangerous femmes to deal with.

Your portrayal of Megatron has been more than superb as well! I found that seeing things through his optics, being privy to his thoughts and opinions, was more than a little enlightening about the character! He was exactly as I would imagine a powerful, regal (if not a little frightening) leader to think and feel about the particulars of the femmes he was surveying. Such a bang on job you did!

The last line of the scene was truly a haunting line that sent a little shiver down my spine-

"The predator had found his prey."

*shudder* You painted the imagine just right- even if Nightshade is no lamb to be thrown to the wolves, Megatron is still the alpha of the pack and it juts feels like she's in for something a little bigger than she could ever possibly imagine...

Nightshade's interaction with Rumble was so adorable! Sure, Rumble was a little creep at times, but what "little brother" (size wise! xD) isn't? I love how she gives him a good whack in the end! Gawd, what i wouldn't give to be able to do that to my real brothers- I wouldn't just treat them to a game of mecha-soccer ball, I'd kick them around for a good tournement's worth!

Even the dialogue between Nightshade and Rumble was wonderfully scripted! My favourite line would have to be "“Look Shadie, dontcha think I can tell ya wanna push his ‘Play’ button?”" xD I cannot put into words how hilarious I find that line!

And then you end the chapter on a most haunting note! Megatron has appeared and it looks like Nightshade is all what he wants! gah! I hope for the next chapter soon- even if I know what the future holds in Vapour Trails, it doesn't make me any less anxious for the next installment of Prayer!

This was well written. Please Continue!

FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY!

I have been waiting for this for SO LONG! I'm so glad you are finally able to post it:)

That last sentence gives me chills! I so much want to see Nightshade with her true love and Megatron has to come along and ruin it:( GAH! And if Soundwave has just been mustering up the courage all this time, then he just missed his chance! DOUBLE GAH!

Okay, this is really really good. I've read it so many times that I practically have that first part memorized...LOL! You certainly pulled any lose ends together very nicely. I just love all the descriptions in the beginning as Megatron is basically 'shopping around.' Flamewar and Barricade always get my heart racing!

And the twist to Floatila is undeniably priceless!

"...on the previous site of one of the most well-known Youth Sectors, the sparklings and their I caretakers having been moved to safer locations vorns before. Nevertheless, if Megatron knew his brother, the master orator that he was, he would be hard at work spinning this bit of trivia to his advantage. He almost looked forward to seeing what idiotic story Optimus and his propagandists came up with for this one."

OMG, that is SO GOOD! Freaking BRILLIANT!

I absolutely LOVE Rumble and Frenzy's antics here.
“Commence Operation: Get Soundwave Laid!”
That's perfect!

The interaction and dialoque between Nightshade and Rumble is awesome. I love how she's watching Flamewar and Barricade and Rumble's suggestion. Her reaction to it was perfect. Then the way you set up her true feelings for Soundwave and Rumble's explanation of how Soundwave is, not going to force her into anything. It's very romantic.

Then Rumble's "Mission accomplished" had me rolling! Too funny!

And that was a nice description of Cade and Flamewar actively entertaining their primal needs;)

And I died laughing at "I'd do ya in an astrosec." With Shade's response, "Figures you wouldn't have any stamina." HAHAHAHAHAHA!

You have a nice balance of romance, humor, and angst going on here that I really really love!

I know you've got a lot of ch. 2 done...I hope you can put it up fairly soon:)

No rush or anything...

Not hurrying you at all...

Nope...not at all...

HURRY UP!

^O^ YOU WROTE! I'm HAPPY! You finally wrote something and it's great! I enjoyed a lot this first chapter and I'll be lloking forward for more. This promises a lot!!

Here, have a cookie! Un.n Just baked them!!

TAKE CARE!!

MISAO-CG