Yatta! Oddly enough, I completely followed all of that. o_O Maybe we're a little warped? Yet this showed the characters in a brand new light, and suddenly Doumeki's personality and attitude took on a completely different tinge without losing anything. Instead it gained so much more. My eyes are still kind of bugging out. Suddenly there's an even deeper meaning behind Doumeki's silences. And even Watanuki got a new piece in there, with his fear of not being accepted and loved by Doumeki.

Wow. Uber hearts to you once again - I'll even throw in there some warm fuzzies and a bucket of sunshine. You just gave the two characters a deep personality overhaul. I bow to thee.

Aw that is so cute. i really liked it.

^_^

perfect ending for Xholic...

Wow. This is simply wonderful. Too beautiful for words. Such perfect imagery and a sweet ending that almost brings a tear to the eye. Excellent job ^_^

LE GASP!!
That was... breathtaking. It was too much fluff and imagery in one sitting. But, it was wonderful. I loved it too much. And Doumeki, was so... ah, I don't know. But, it was nice. Really nice.
I loved it.
And so I shall never read it again.
Or maybe tomorrow I will.
Maybe.

Cherry.

Wa... Amazing, simply amazing. I can really picture them being so hesitant, so uncertain... yet so desperate. The metaphors and similes were simply beautiful, and the mood was very carefully worked... did I mention that you're one of my favourite authors for xholic fanfiction? :3

OH. MY. GOD.

That is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read! Why the hell aren't you out in the real world publishing reams and reams of poetry!? I have been studying for years, practicing for years, and God knows I can't write like that! ARGH! I'm jealous as all hell, and I love you for writing that!

I was just reading your stuff yesterday! The one about the book that tells all of Watanuki's feelings and he has to get it back from Doumeki or he'll find out his thoughts. It's nice to see that you're still writing and that your skills haven't diminished at all, lol.

Holy **.

Thank you.
-'Eagle

*cries*
Doumeki took that leap...
This brought tears to my eyes and after a good bruising workout, this kind of sweetness was just what I needed. Thank you.
You are wonderful.

That was beautiful. I loved all the way you compared Watanuki to jewels, and the imagery that painted.

Very well done.