 SSG Michael B Jackson 2008-07-02 . chapter 1Well, Amanda, this was a great little piece here and a nice way to start writing inside the established continuity. You picked one of those spots in the series where all of us, I think, have kind of said, "Huh. I wonder how she got from point A to point B" over the years.
I mean, at the end of one episode, Priss is handing Anri the disc and the next time we see her she's Largo's 'plant' inside Genom. I guess you can kind of see one situation leading to the other, but it's nice (and very plausible IMHO) to see how you imagine that happening.
Also, it looks to me like you got the characterizations just about spot-on and it was nice to see your take on the relationship between Sylvie and Anri; it was never made explicit in the OVA's (that I can remember) but certainly has sparked many a thread on a few discussion boards, I think.
Over all, I think this is very good and hope to see more of these kinds of stories from you. We all love the Purple Knight Saber, I think, but it's always nice to see a competent writer who cares about the material working inside the original BGC time line.
Mike Jackson |