i love that twist at the end!

lol that was definitely one of the best endings I've ever read in my life! I absolutely love it and I think you should continue this oneshot

WTF? Screw Jacob! How'd he end up with Bella and Edward, in Heaven? He should've gone the opposite way! Edward and Bella ended up in Heaven because they're GOOD people, unlike that mutt! God Dammit! I hate Jacob so much...At least Edward and Bella are together, that's the only up-side. This was a very good story!

WTF!

WHAT IN THE WORLD IS JACOB DOING THERE!

Well, you just succeeded in making everyone in the room certain that I am completely crazy. I was just about crying in the middle of this fic, and when they asked what was wrong, all I could choke out was "Edward's gonna kill himself!" I was getting some odd looks. And then, the last four lines. I started laughing hysterically. They didn't even ask.

Anyway, great, great, amazing, wonderful story!

Hahaha, really sweet, but I love the ending.

that. was. AMAZING!

HEY!

you forgot to pput the name and artist of the song in .

a-GR

I love that songg! (

I just can't remember the artist damn it and i want to listen to it RIGHT NOW

pfft, have ot get it on youtube and convert files into mp3 from video.. do you know how much extra effort than just simply limewireing it that takes? -.-

poof-ball .

lol, you know, in every place you have a song quote you should have the name and artist at the top or bottom, or somewhere, for acnowledgment.

andyway it's 20 to 2 am so yeah my spelling sucks as you can see coz i'm tired

nigh-night.

xox

-Jet

That was heart breaking. And beautiful. And well, god damn it, I cried.

Oh my God. You've got me crying and then burst out laughing like a lunatic. Good job. LOL.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

oh my

gosh

HAHAH.

okay

you have me in tears, which is almost next to impossible to do

and then, you have me ecstatic for eddie and bella

and then you have me laughing like hell at the ending

bravo HAHA :)

Oh shit Jacob is there too lol I would love to see a spin off of this just to see what happens lol. ANyways great job!

Holy mother of shit. You are absolutely brilliant.

You made me cry the whole way throug, once I learned

to whom Bella was marrying. You then make me laugh

at the ending. Absolutely brilliant.

HA-HA-HA-HA...

Wow, I was NOT expecting that.

Well, before that, it was extremely, beautifully, and painfully sad.

You have a very strong writing voice, and it's very enjoyable to read.

FAVEDFAVEDFAVEDFAVEDFAVED! :D

Oh my dazzling Edward, I loved this story!

It made me cry so much... Then smile... Then roll on the floor laughing. :))

The ending's funny. :))

I mean, yeah, it was sad; both Edward and Bella died, but at least they were together. :) But then JAKE just HAD to be in heaven, too! :

But, that's fine... I like surprise endings. :))

Good job *thumbs up*

Jade