OMG! Tessa! Nata! That was GREAT! I absolutely adored it...I always wish something like that would happen to me! And the story was really funny too, and I loved Tribune. You guys are so cute...great work!

LOL! That was the cutest fic! Good job to the both of you! Write more, and I would love to read a sequel if you were to write one. Again, I loved it!

That was a great story! Very imaginative :)

My name is Tyrone, the African-American Prince of Harlem. Your story enchants me!

yeah you really need an editor. you've got a lot of grammar problems and many sentence fragments that make for difficult reading. don't use the dotdotdot thing too much. ( the ... thing) good idea though

Hey Nata and Taz ! You two did really great work ! A good imagination ! I love your story and hope to read more from both of you ! Steffi :-)