AMAZING! You have the talent here, with the plot, character development-with words in general! I bow to your talent!!

Really original idea.

This is so creative and original. Very well thought out. Someone once said that the 3 greatest motivators of great stories are: Power, Revenge, Love. Here you have all three, but of course, in the end, love conquers all, despite everything that has transpired amongst the characters. For that, I salute you! I loved how you gave the characters their motivations, which evolved over time. The character development is wonderful, and so is the pacing.

I wish there was an epilogue, if only because after all that incredibly written action-packed, dramatic sequence, the ending seemed so abrupt. I mean the chapter built up into a glorious crescendo, slowed down perfectly to when Shizuru almost lay almost dying, then she sees the new angel that is Natsuki, blah blah, but what causes the abruptness is the last line. It seemed to need at least a brief follow up paragraph to end in a really smooth flowing closing, since they're in an ebbing ocean after all, matching the serenity of waves crashing against the shore.

Damn, I got all poetic again. =P Well, needless to say, I truly enjoyed reading this remarkable story you weaved! I couldn't stop reading, even when I knew I really should eat dinner. Plus at the end I cried! Thank you so much for writing this! *clicks on Add to Favorite Stories* =)

wow. i love your first chapter! it should definitely be made into an actual anime opening! that would be so cool! ^_^

I love this story! Absolute Perfect ending!! Nice job

THAT was the best last chapter ever! I wanted to kiss you then attack you! It was was on He!l of a roller coaster in the end. But thank you for it (although for some reason I kept expecting Miyu and Alyssa to pop up, maybe a a parallel story).
I enjoyed it!

wow i just finished reading your fanfic. this was awesome man!! poor nao. sighs* but oh well it had to be done :P thank you for completing your fanfic. these days people dont complete their art work they just leave it and let their readers starve. thank you thank you THANK YOU! please continue to write i really liked this. i would love to see what else you can think of to produce.

Ms. Smiles is smiling.

ah i loved it. i'd been reading it for a while, then forgot about it then found it again and finished it today. it was fantastic. it made me tear up a little with happiness at the end. thank you for a wonderful story.

You scared the hell of me at the end XD but finally I just love the conclusion - how surprising ^_^
Thank you so much for this amazing story :)

That was fantastic!! I couldn't stop reading it, and even during school, i was thinking up things that could possibly happen! YAY!! Happy endings rule!! :D

Thank for sharing this story to me..the readers

this chapter it was unexpect ...wow! i love it! eventhough i feel sorry about Reito.he's good guy but i'm Shiznat's fan!
i'm so glad about this happy ending.

--Hope that i'll see u again--

loved it, so sad to see it end, great story...

This was an amazing read from start to finish :D

the ending left me with a huge grin on my face, thank you for writing this! X3

OMG! That was so worth the long wait!! I LOVE YOU! and I'm really glad this ended happily , for a second there I thought Shizuru was gonna die as well when Natsuki did. YAY! NATSUKI's an angel!

Kudos! That ending was great! Love it! :)

Hrmm... I wonder if what will happen if Natsuki (angel) meets Nao (demon) ... hehehe... nahh... :P