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Element Girls
2008-10-19 . chapter 2
So my friend Desert.moon told me to check this fic out because I had just gone on a rampage about how there are no good RyouOc fic.

And I was not disappointed at all! I love the whole violin angel!! It’s so different from anything I’ve ever read and I love that! And you even brought Miho into it! Don’t see her a lot. And I love the fact that even as you bash her you bash her because Izzy is jealous not because the author doesn’t like her (personally I hate her)

Very very well done! I really can’t wait for more!

Oh btw does Ryou have his Yami still?

-Liz
Desert.Moon
2008-10-18 . chapter 2
Wow. I have to say, I really like this. A LOT. I tensed up when I saw that Izzy has a yami who was queen of thieves, but as I kept writing, it's very well-played. Izzy is a really realistic character--something refreshing after a lot of Mary Sues ;p--and her yami doesn't steal the spotlight. Even though Ryou never played the violin in canon, it WORKS here, and I like that. AND you kept him in-character, which I also like. A lot. ;p (This is the first really good RyouOC fic I've found not written by a friend, and it's made me very happy. :D :D :D) Also, the story itself is well-written, with few to no clerical errors (grammar, punctuation, etc.), another thrilling bonus for me. XD Yayz.

So thank you so much for an enjoyable read! I look forward to more. :D
Thanks,
Kit :)
IZZZZYYY[:
2008-07-03 . chapter 2
YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!
marina i love you.
t recorder
2008-07-03 . chapter 2
i happen to agree with izzy in a small way when it comes to her waryness of miho, that girl just simpy can not be trusted [and this has nothing to do with the fact she has a crush on ryou in the manga, nope, nothing at all] i like the story update soon
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