 Desert.Moon 2008-10-18 . chapter 2Wow. I have to say, I really like this. A LOT. I tensed up when I saw that Izzy has a yami who was queen of thieves, but as I kept writing, it's very well-played. Izzy is a really realistic character--something refreshing after a lot of Mary Sues ;p--and her yami doesn't steal the spotlight. Even though Ryou never played the violin in canon, it WORKS here, and I like that. AND you kept him in-character, which I also like. A lot. ;p (This is the first really good RyouOC fic I've found not written by a friend, and it's made me very happy. :D :D :D) Also, the story itself is well-written, with few to no clerical errors (grammar, punctuation, etc.), another thrilling bonus for me. XD Yayz.
So thank you so much for an enjoyable read! I look forward to more. :D
Thanks,
Kit :) |
 t recorder 2008-07-03 . chapter 2i happen to agree with izzy in a small way when it comes to her waryness of miho, that girl just simpy can not be trusted [and this has nothing to do with the fact she has a crush on ryou in the manga, nope, nothing at all] i like the story update soon |