This is definitely above average in terms of writing style, so that's a good start.

Some suggestions:

\\“Confusing is what it is” Maeglin stated as he exhaled deeply.\\

Should be: “Confusing is what it is,” Maeglin stated as he exhaled deeply.

See the comma? Also, it is generally better to use "said" rather than fancier verbs like "stated". They stick out.

Finally– and this is the big one– do you think Elvish parents would name their kid after MAEGLIN? It seems unlikely.