OMG I love this fic. Please update.

If you need any help with this fic. just call me and I'll help ;)

please fin this story

Oh my gosh... Donald is... there just isn't a word that's strong enough to describe how horrible he is! Poor Donnie... poor, poor Donnie... You wrote the scene that Mikey walked into so descriptively that tears stung my eyes with each word. Please update soon and get Don out of there. He's so sweet and giving... he doesn't deserve that. *sniffles*

It would be interesting, btw, if Rafieo was the one who saved him. :D

are ya ever gonna finish this story

that is sadly sweet. Ok, Dark Don, aka Donald is a *cencored* jurk! How could h do such things to poor inocent Donnie? I will curse myself for saythis about little mikey, but he and Dark Raph/Rafieo seem good to eachother. I'm ** of at DD now! How could that sniviling lizard do such things to sweet inocent little Donatello Hamato? What had little Donnie ever done to him? What an **!

AWSOME!

*mutters* bloody bastards letting that happen! Freaky damn covards! The- *looks up* Oh? It's review-time? Sorry, got caught up in cursing a bit there... I want the bastard seriously hurt for this... just so you know... ;o)

Hey what happened to chapter 5 and 6 on the Live Journal? They dissapered some weeks ago.

I love your work! please update! I want to read chapter 7.

Poor Mikey...What am I saying? Poor DONNIE! ...Still...'breathes deeply'...I won't yell...

Mikey: Yeah, right...

Me: 'smacks upside head'

Mikey: OW! 'pouts'

Me: ANYWAY...You still did a good job...But I'll kill Donald if I ever 'see' him...With a rocket launcher...Don't think I won't!

Raph: Trust me, she will!

Me: See? The violent turtle agrees with me.^^

woah! intense man. totally. oh man, poor donnie!

gr,

want more mikey! hehehehe. want mikey hurt too (evil me) maybe grabbed by evil donnie. idk, mikey too. hehehehehehehehe

sorry evil me up there talking. bad me! anyway. yay, its was awesome, but more mikey!

...I've never read a story like this...And I think I like it. Except for what's happening to poor Donnie...'hugs Donnie chibi'...But I was kinda staring at this chapter for a moment, like 'Why does Mikey get the long end of the stick?' It kinda made me laugh...Anyway, good job.^^

well, ur right, i was going to be surprised. Compared to Don, that was cruel. But man, they kidnapped him. No torture, no pain, sorry, but I like Mikey to suffer!

Com'n, let Raph's clone, suffer from one of Raph's temper crazes. Let Mikey get hurt! Its not right!

Sorry, i know its weird, but I like Mikey getting hurt, and the way don was hurt was cruel, and mean.

I kinda expected my heart to be pounding in fear for My mikey, but it was kind of mellow.

Please? Have a crazed Raph clone episode? Or Donald going nuts on Mikey? Or something? I like My mikey getting hurt, thats the sadistic part of me! LOL.

*lol* Yes that was a surprisingly mellow chapter... I love these strange situations... poor mike.. well, not POOR mike, if you compare to DON... gawd... I'm still having trouble letting that chap go...

even though I alredy read this its still as cool as reading it the first time.

XD/i think this is one of your best chappies!
update soon lol.

oh cool. I think this is new...i didn't see this chap in liveJ.
great work Lol.