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Reviews for: Lines of an Overprotective Father
heartsinlove51 8/9/10 . chapter 1
can u write a marriage story about soul maka
Romancelover1321 1/19/10 . chapter 1
It was cute, not my favorite but cute the none the less.
Novalia1001 10/11/09 . chapter 1
I like it. Simply, light Soul/Maka, easy to read, totally capturing the aspect of the three characters.

A bit disappointing that it was only a one- shot, it would be a nice beginning for a long story, but then again, you're the wrter here.

Ciao!
Midnight Ghost 10/10/09 . chapter 1
i wanna maka dool.:
ElricKeyblade 4/28/09 . chapter 1
O, this looks nice. bd Sweet n' simple, great job!
iryna 3/20/09 . chapter 1
Ahaha, I loved it! I would love to see more Soul/Maka fics :D
TrinityAngelX 11/27/08 . chapter 1
that was really..unique
Moeyjo 7/1/08 . chapter 1
Cute-D
lizabeth3 7/1/08 . chapter 1
Voted for your picture (love those shoes by the way And you should write more SxM stories. This one was great!
Amulet Strawberry 7/1/08 . chapter 1
Poor Death Scythe...NOT! Really funny story!

P.S. I voted
DenyRoxsYourMismatchedSoxs 7/1/08 . chapter 1
There I voted for you.
Anyways, the story was cute, and Maka's dad was also funny, I still can't help but feel bad for him XD
xnalu 7/1/08 . chapter 1
YES, you wrote a SxM. TT

It's unbelievably cute. You got their personalities and the atmosphere right on.
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