This is amazing! It would be awesome if you could write a sequel though. Like, three years later and they meet again and he probably still wouldn't be married... If you do write a sequal, please send me a message, I would love to read it!

Please continue. This is really good. It sounds just like Ella. not OOC at all. I love the idea too. but how does she break the curse now? You have to finish it.

hey u should continue it
personally i think it's great

I think you really should write more. Because that is one really good cliffy. Dont do this to me! hahaha. 10/10
ttyl

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it was ssad but good you should write a happy ending!

Uhh... You're not much for happy endings, are you? It was beautifully written, I'm just a happy ending kinda gal. Then again, happy endings are kind of cliché, aren't they? Loved the story, I hope I see more of your work, you're a goo writer.

It doesn't suck, it's very good. I'm just such a hopeless romantic I love the ending of the book, and don't really like other versions. I'm asking myself why I clicked this then, but it's very well written.
Continue it if you want, you're a good author 0

t's too sad for me !

I like it. Please keep writing.

Definitely keep writing! You could have Ella and Mandy hired by this rich countess and then she invites the Char over and he sees her and...and they fall in love again, and ...and yeah. . Please do that! Please please please please please! (puts on puppy dog eyes) please?

Hey- I really think this is good. It's almost like Where Would I Hide Without A Mask but different, which I really like. YOu're structure is perfect, I couldn't find any wrong spelling and the plot is great. I've always wanted to know what would happen if they got a way.
I like making the princes work to get the princess. Please keep writing! Don't be like that author who wrote Living for Death Dying for Life and hasn't written in aaggeess! I am very mad at her...him...whatever. Just please keep writing and read Where Would I Hide Without A Mask, It is thee best fanfic ever and is very similar to yours.

I personally think you dhould continue it is good it has me wanting to read more of

I am caught wondering...yes I think I will read your optional ending...or whatever it is.

oooo that's pretty good write more don't just leave us hanging...

Hey, neato!

Long live the lollipops!