cool one ooooooooooooooooooooo!

AHHHHH! SOO CUTE! X3 haha naruto at the end! priceless!

that was really cool.i finally gets her happy ending

after 4 .

I did like this one-shot but i felt sakura was a bit too pushy like when she was asking him if she could use his lap or when they should dance i think there should of been more enthusiam fro sasuke though i know its important to keep him in character

i dont mean to be criticall cause i honestly liked this story but that was my opinion on it

i mostly liked the plot in general

keep up the good work

oh lol! it was sweet n fluffy! yaay!

its pretty good... good job!

Aw... so sweet!

oh! continue it!

its not really crack.. not especially.

but if it is I LOVED IT!

it was really good.

lol!

very funny!

I think drunk Naruto might try to punch Sasuke. (LoL)

maybe partial crack. ah, we couldn't end it with a sober naruto. but why was it painful to write the fact that his supposedly first kiss was by naruto? lol. but really?

Cute and well written

TS14

Not really crack. Sasuke was blushing a lot, but I liked it. Pretty spiffy idea with the sharingan and all. Haha, good ole' Naruto at the end.

I like it 8D

a few errors but i think it's true to the genre and amazingly fluffy, something a sasusaku fangirl would have daydreams about (ahem ahem)...and the last line is so funny...plus its dedicated to me! wondermus!

ish

Aww, that was cute. He started stroking her hair and then she says his name and he's goes shit. Haha and Naruto at the end. :P