 Avatard12 2009-11-21 . chapter 1Has great potential! Must continue! |
 Lady Kayura 2009-10-08 . chapter 3That was it? You need to write more! |
 Kazu0 2008-08-01 . chapter 3Azula and Ty Lee, man, those girls are mean. M, I was especting Katara to be the other girl; while I'm not that fan of zutara, I think she would be a better "rival" for Mai than Jin.
I can't beleive Zuko said that, moron. I'm liking this fic more and more, please, do update, please, please, please. |
 Kazu0 2008-08-01 . chapter 2I hate Azula but I certainly like this one. Also, I'm a fan of Jane Austen and Maiko, so the tone of your fic is really apealing to me. So, please update, I'm really looking forward to a new chapeter (even tough I haven't read the 3rd. Still, I'm wating for it.
See ya |
 sectumsempra 2008-07-16 . chapter 3Oh poor Mai! =(
I can see that this is going to be a very long journey... |
 sara 2008-07-16 . chapter 3 your a very clever writer if you write more i would read it |
 puttingpentopaper 2008-07-16 . chapter 3I'm really enjoying this. It's a nice break from all of the other fics. I'm really enjoying seeing everyone so formal and such. Plus, I've always found this era so elegant and sophisticated, well, for the upperclass.
Please update soon. |
 GeorgiaPeaches 2008-07-09 . chapter 2Haha, surprised Zuko is funny. :3 Azula has an evil plan! I know it. She always does. =] Can not wait to see more. |
 wrenwatcher 2008-07-09 . chapter 2You-- this-- this story is really wonderful. It's written beautifully, and just... the style, oh, it's so amusing and well-imitated. I am eagerly awaiting chapter three. |
 Katako-Chan 2008-07-09 . chapter 2I LOVE THIS! I was weirded out of my mind at first, mostly because of the sudden last names and English-ness of it all, but I really, really love this!
Zuko and Mai interactions are hilarious, and I think you have Azula spot on! Great job :D
Update soon!
Katako-Chan |
 sectumsempra 2008-07-09 . chapter 2Oh I love it!
Bit confusing (I'm not very good at all the formal language) but absolutely lovely. And quite different to your usual writing. Is the plot based off another book? Reminds me of Jane Austen (though I've only seen a few of her things)
Can't wait to read more. Zuko is so cute =P |
 GeorgiaPeaches 2008-07-02 . chapter 1Sweet! :D I love the Jane Austen style of writing! Mai is the perfect character for this, I can't wait to see what you do with this story. |
 tege 2008-07-02 . chapter 1 You've got the Austin style down-dry humor, character observation-without getting pretentious. Mai does work well in this world.
Looking forward to more. |
 Aurora-Perkins 2008-07-02 . chapter 1Interesting style (Miss Austen :) But i can already see where you have differed from the original text and can't wait to see what you make of the rest of it.
The Mai interation with the other characters looks to be entertaining. |