 GunSmoke2 3/14/10 . chapter 6Awesome story, can't wait for more chapters. |
 Tanathar 2/10/09 . chapter 6Fascinating, interesting, captivating, a tiny bit confusing, but well worth reading. Please continue. |
 Samael3 11/9/08 . chapter 1 It's amazing my boy but actually I've got nothing to critizice you except the use of the stoopid Asgards. If there is an species (not race! that's xenophobic) that is the f*c*s of God is them. Ohterwise as long as you keep it an straigth HP Lovecraft tale without the stoopid "Alterated" or WC-1 is fine :P |
 Rory Gilmore 11/3/08 . chapter 5 Honsltey mistah, you do not need a God of Flash, you need a Pantheon of Common Sense that make you leave this BS, and I'm also a proud member of the Samaelite Collective! |
 Taliath 10/30/08 . chapter 5Fascinating work. Keep it up! |
 Taliath 8/9/08 . chapter 3Brilliant work. I would've loved reading the Asgard's response to having Harry appear like that, but I suppose the time-skip is for the best. In any case, I do hope to read more. Please update soon.
This story is going to be epic, I just know it. |
 apocalyps24 7/24/08 . chapter 2that has got to be one of the most confusing chapters of any story ive ever read... wtf
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 Robert1000 7/24/08 . chapter 2great chapter please update soon |
 Aetheogh 7/2/08 . chapter 1Sounds interesting. So some sort of crossover. Wonder how the xeno-freaks from nBSG will react to Great Alliance AI community. Should be fun. Keep writing. |
 He who surfs the screen 7/2/08 . chapter 1 more dialogue and it'd be a better read IMO. |
 apocalyps24 7/2/08 . chapter 1now that has got to be the most confusing amount of information ive come across in a long time lol... whats a colonel general?
looking forward to see how this continues though
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