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A funny and delightful sequel that one enjoys even more the second time around. I can just visualise Scott stuck down in the elevator shaft. LOL - go Al!

Well done to a great author.

mcj

This was great fun!! I loved all the intrigue with Jeff in the middle of everything, but unaware of the reason for his sons' strange behaviour. And Alan better enjoy his time with Tin-Tin while it lasts. I suppose he can try and relive the joy as he recuperates from what I assume will be painful payback via Scott and Virgil. Thank you!

This was a joy - Thank you.

I love that Alan is happy in the moment, I think that resonates with his (somewhat reckless) character. The subterfuge was good, as was the suggestion of a "code" amoung the brothers. And to top it all off it was well written, the dialogue felt right and it made me smile. Who could ask for more? Thank you again.

I've always wondered what happened to Virgil and Scott after MAYD. This story describes a scene like that perfectly!

Great story! I've always wanted to read a follow-up from Move and You're Dead, and this one was very good. I laughed so much I nearly cried. It sounded like typical Tracy life there.

Ha, ha, very good! This really had me chuckling. I loved the way Scott and Virgil very much saw contacting Gordon as a last resort! Oh boy will they make Alan suffer! Lovely story that really cheered my day.