I'm not done with the story, however I would like to add that the Potions professor at that time was Slughorn, just so you know. :)

It's really good--onward!
-M

hmm...i've read this story years ago...hahah! great story

Nice

What a great story!! I loved it, and I've never considered this pairing before...I think it was interesting, and very well written.

You're a great author!

~Sandy~

You are my hero. This story was AWESOME! I loved it. I read it all in like 2 hours! Gonna go check out your other stuff, lol!

Alex

got this story suggested to me on a forum, and i loved it!

babe... u really need a beta. its not that the plot is bad. its that the grammer is killing my soul X.x

yeah great story is there going to be a squeal.

Thanks so much for writing this story, I loved it!

Absolutely amazing :D

Lots of love, keep doing what you're doing

Abs x

Bah. I'm done. This is crap. :/

While I like the story in general, you really need to tone down the details. Things like what they're thinking being expressed, when it's already obviously inferred by action becomes redundant. And things like the song Hermione was listening to. Unnecessary and takes away from the flow of the writing.

yay hyper harry!

omg, i totally already forgot about the letter!

omg they should have walked in on the sword fight!! that would have been so AWESOME! :)

...i'm actually tempted to see what would happen if they got locked in the room of requirement...