its really nice...but i wish it had lemons...

i also love the disney classic beauty and the beast,and i wish i had thought of it but u r really an awsome writer.(i think sasuke suits gastaun PERFECTLY)

Beautiful. It was such a touching story, and, despite some miniscule OOCness, you kept the characters as close as possible to usual.
After I read this, I tried to look for other NaruSaku fairy tales, but none came up. Although people seem to draw pictures of couples acting out a fairy tale, you don't see many fanfictions of them. It was an unusual idea, and a brilliant one at that.
The relationship of Naruto and Sakura was so sweet. As I have never seen Beauty and the Beast all the way through, I can't really judge that well, but I think you got the whole 'Belle and Beast' relationship almost spot on.
All I can say is; please keep writing!

very cool

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cool story

um it's good but extremely OOC, like not even funny. you might as well have taken the script of Beauty and the Beast and jsut changed the names of the characters.

If your gonna use the B&B plot line, fine, thats what had me interested to check it out, but because it's from the naruto world, you should keep the characers in check. Keep them in character cause thats why we all like Naruto.

IF you've ever studied writing, you would know that characterisation is one of the most important thigns to a good story so for future reference, keep them in their own character!!

You have briliant writing, just work on how you write your characters

I actually went out and rented the original disney movie before reading this, and I must say that you stuck to the source material quite loyally, which made for some good novelty entertainment. In fact, it was quite entertaining overall. Well written.

As for constructive criticism, I'll just say that sticking to the source material so closely like that is also a double-edged sword.

Oops, the story (duh)
It was totally completely awesome. It encouraged me to write a version of Enchanted (though it did not meet the expectations of this)
I don't know why, but my favorite part was when you brought Lee into it. (I made Lee the chipmunk in Enchanted) I was laughing so hard. Anyway, I loved it! Thanks for the great read.


=^.^= MangaLuvr1r34

LOL you have an account on Heaven & Earth too.

It saddens me that its now over but all fics must come to an end, anyways I simply loved this story of yours, and the ending with the parents was so cute^^

from chili i give you my respect.
I`m always looking for stories like these , and i finaly found a very desent one!
congratulations!

Wow.

Breathtakingly beautiful.
Seriously, you made me fall in love with the story of Beauty and the Beast all over again.
It actually fits the NaruSaku relationship.

It was funny how jerky and OOC Sasuke was in this fic though. Although I gotta admit, he was the perfect character for the role xD

Wah! Bravo! Thank you so much for writing this fic. Hope you write many more NaruSaku fics in the future. You capture emotions very well in a fic.

This was the best i think you might know me from Deviant art,i go by the same name their i think you my best Whiter other then M Night Shemlina( spelling), Stephen King Jk Rwolling, Cs Lewis. Your a Good whiter and you bring out the Character in the best way

Ps. You rock Hard

I really liked this story, it was very refreshing, plus I liked seeing Gai and Kakashi's little squabbles as house funitures. I also liked the friendship between Ino and Sakura. And you really had Naruto portray the Beast very well. Plus, you even got creative, and threw in some other favorited characters, like Gaara as the sand in the shoreline, very clever, or Hinata and Hinabi as telescopes, genious (especially the symbolism of Hinata with her head in the stars, and Hinabi being more down to earth. Heh heh).

I know it would be to much to ask, but are you going to be doing the Beauty and the Beast Sequel, uh, the enchanted christmas? If so, you should have Madara play the part of the evil organ, Forte. And perhaps just for humor, have Tobi play the part of the piccolo, Fife.

Now if not, I understand. But just give it some consideration.

Signed,
Mr. Nobody