I LOVE this story. The attention to details, the range of emotion, the subtle hints at Rikku's crush on Auron, but nothing blatant and over the top. Great stuff. Favoriting it.

-claps- Great job. Very touching :D

Beautiful. I found this one-shot wonderfully atmospheric and really well created. The whole idea is really wonderful. And the slight Aurikku tint to it was magical. It wasn't over the top love but a small sense of longing, you know? This is how I imagined it. Of a young girl being in awe of a stronger and wiser companion. It was a pleasure to read it and such a beautiful piece of art.

Well done on such an amazing piece.

It earns itself a place in my favourites.

~Adam x

Dang...that was good.
lol, yeah, all I have to say. It stands out among all the fics by being indescribably in-character and descriptive.
Great job.

~Saph