I'm really loving the story so far. It's really captivating and heartwarming, with a nice charactisation of Dumbledore -- and yet devasting too, as it must be.

But ... are you aware of the absence of speech marks? It is not to hard to surmise where speech begins and ends because of double spaces, and a good grasp of grammar from the off, but it does make me trip up every now and again. And I can't help but wonder that it'll do the same to other readers, and may even put others off from pursuing this to the end. Which I fully intend to do, because I really love the premise and your skill as a writer.

Could it be the site perhaps? I know there have been changes in the past to formatting and such, and I know it has caused problems for many.

Anyway. Thanks for sharing.

Do you have this posted anywhere else? It is just driving me crazy with first few chapters having those little boxes everywhere. I don't want to have to skip over those and miss something.

Brilliant!

it looks good... but I have such a hard time reading with your formating... Lines in short paragraph form, no "" around talking.

I have been devouring your stories and even though it's three in the morning, I can't seem to stop even long enough to leave a review but for this chapter. I have the biggest smile on my face, from the students helping Snape to the Gryffindor and Slytherin quidditch teams practicing together. Thank you so much for making my night.

I love your story...its great. I just finished it...good stuff...for a moment I thought you where gonna kill Snape but...I'm glad you didn't. And you got help for Siries too... yay!!

Raven dancer you rock...This fanfic has to be the best (and longest)I have ever read on fanfiction, and I love it. I just finished the books and Im sad it over but you portrail of Snape and Dumbledors relationship is rivled only by J.K. herself...no I believe you give better insight than she does in DH. Its not all slashy and lemony..(not saying I dont like theose but only when there good)..it's like a Uncle and Nephew...it's emoational and deep without being to slow and without being boring...I LOVE YOUR STORY AND IM ONLY ON CHAPTER 4! I do plan on finishing this great work of lituature (please excuse the spelling) and will read the res of your stories...I love Snape and cried when he was gone...*tear* Anyways I look foward to the rest of your works :)

This is an awesome story!! You should send it in to J.K. Rowling!

Your story wouldn't let me review for the last chapter 45, it said: Chapter out of Range Review rejected. Please alert admin. I don't know how to do that, unfortunatly... but I DID complete reading it, so here is my review for the whole lot!

I fell in love with your story! It was pure beautiful loving anghsty goodness! I LOVE Severus, I think he's my favorite character. This story made me laugh, cry, smile, gasp in shock.horror and caused me to have a desire to want to jump into the story and hug Severus tightly. You did a truly beautiful job! I'm jellous that I'm not the author. You are amazing, I love your writing. I can not tell you how happy I am with the ending of this story! That poor Severus made it through and filally can see and except that he's loved. I'm so glad he has so many friends now too! There are too stong a words i'd like to scream at Sirius, he was HORRIBLE! I'm wishing and hoping and begging for a sequel to this story. I think you posted one, if so I'm going to read and review it asap! Once again, I LOVE this story, thanks for posting it! I adore emotional stories with happy endings. I'm such a sap sometimes, lol.

P.S. Are you interested in Harry Potter RPG? If so, contact me please!

I tried to post this for chapter 45 but my review was rejected O.O

REJECTED!!

Anywho, without further adue (sp?)..

I LOVE YOU!!

OMG ZOMG I LOVE YOU!!

HEART!!

MARY ME AND LET ME HAVE YOUR BABY!!

Awsome story by the way =3

Excellent!

This almost sounds like pregnancy, except you're more conscious of your 'child' here. Very nice. In fact the whole healing business was very interesting throughout the story. I love the intimacy and the treatment of the patient as a human being. The clear unity of body and soul. Nice job!

I love how the size of beds can be adjusted with the flick of a wand, I would appreciate to know such a charm.

I almost feel sorry for Sirius. Of course, Harry is right, he was already nasty before he went ot prison...
I hope Dr. James and Severus will be okay.

Wow, catch 22, the question is whether Harry is getting worse fater than Severus is getting better...