i must say, i would like to hear about the "bath in the creek" that Jess and Leslie take together. that would be an interesting one-shot afterwards

ALLELUIA! HALLELUJAH!HOWEVER THE HECK YA SPELL IT!

nice

this is so cool, plez update fast

it was really good!

I am really enjoying this story very much and I hope you update it really soon.

Excellent story, I’ll be awaiting the epilogue. BTW… I was expelled from a school bus in much the same way that Jesse was (I was falsely accused of course, just like Jesse was). It was a long time ago though, so the rules were probably different then.

Oi, the book turned out fine, didn't it? Everyone could make that mistake! Please update soon?

Bye,
Lisette

Great story!! can't wait for the epilogue :)

You're a Filipino too right? Well, me too! :)

Well that sure didn't start the way I expected after the end of the last chapter. :)

Another fantastic update, not that I expected anything less from you Tom. I enjoyed the references to Liberty Valence, it's one of my Dad's favorites.

Brilliant chapter! Great reference to Zooey Deschanel's filmography!

Well, it fit the book, didn't it? Nice chapter, and Alexandra was so funny!
~Sidney (Formerly WritingSia)

Even though it's short, it was still a good chapter. Really nice cliffhanger!

Nice chapter, and a quick update as well. :)
Looking forward to chap 8.

That's cool!
~Sidney