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Arquenniel
2008-07-02
ch 1,
abuseI really appreciated this peek at Jack's first marooning. It's the first fic I've ever seen to address that part of his life. The sea shanty is gorgeous, and the latin is hysterical!
Nytd
2008-07-02
ch 1,
abuseDarlin', that's an old song for a young lass like yourself! It is a great one to write a story about Jack around though.

Ah, and here is Jack weabling down the beach! I must use that later when I get around to writing about Jack. It's not weaving, and not wobbling, but weabling!

"would help him catch is barring" Catch his bearing?

"had almost been sold as salve" sold as a slave? Aye?

"Jack had to admit that he would have probably done the same to Barbossa, given him half the chance."

Yeah, or maybe bloody Jack wouldn't even give Barbossa a chance by marooning him and might just bloody shoot him through the bloody heart when he wasn't looking!

Sorry, got a bit carried away defending Hector there for a moment. ;p

"The baubles in his hair were good for more than just decoration, after all."

This is a great idea about what Jack might have bargained with.

"plenty of offers to by that particular braid" Buy, yes? ;)

Fun version of the marooning, Dizzles!

Cheers, luv.
Nytd
Jennifer Lynn Weston
2008-07-02
ch 1,
abuseJack's Latin sayings are *well* ahead of his time! The man must be something of a prophet.
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