 Sorceress Jade 2009-01-06 . chapter 1This was definitely fun. But mostly I wanted to review for your summary. You make it sound like she ran them over. ::snort-giggle:: |
 Beatrice Alice Potter 2008-07-04 . chapter 1awesome. although i had to hunt down the first chapter of breaking dawn before I read it. |
 Iris Messenger 2008-07-03 . chapter 1cute! |
 nyckiii 2008-07-03 . chapter 1OMC- that made me totally laugh! This is an amazing idea, and I loved the first chapter of Breaking Dawn! Its so creative that you're doing it in THEIR perspective! Great job, as usual! Cant wait to read more of your work! ;) |
 Eowyn77 2008-07-02 . chapter 1LOL LOVE this one, Ish! :D I never even thought about their POV. Great job! |
 An LOTR Freak 2008-07-02 . chapter 1 O that is absolutely adorable i love it great job! |