I LOVE this story! (:
arrgghh its like everything I could have wished for!! I wish it had lasted longer though I tried to savour every word of it though!!
thankyou (: i wish you'd write more.

I liked the beginning, mostly. I enjoyed the second chapter, but started to loose interest. By the end of chapter 3 I'm finding it too un-believable to continue. I very much LIKE the idea you've created, that the world is continuing with missions and the like, but this introduction of the Russians, and this teenage girl knowing soo much, etc. is just beyond me. Very nice concept, best luck with future attempts.
Cheers Jen
P.S. watch your spelling and continuity.

Loved the story!!