Beautiful write, and very cute at the end. Emotions came through very well.

*dragging broad sword behind her* hey Caspian wait up! I want to learn to fight to! COME TEACH ME!


Yes, if you cannot tell i enjoyed your story immensely. *frowns* I want Caspian to help me swing like he did Susan!

So cute! Bravi! and very well written!

yay that was great i always hated the way the movie finished but now with them almost together yay, Love it

this story was very cute!

Y'know - I still think you should write more on this... *pokes you* but at the same time I don't want you to slow down on Crossing Borders... *sighs* oh decisions decisions... Which do I want more...? Oh heck, someone just needs to tie you to your computer. Perfect solution, no?

AW!!

I hope you write a collection of fluffy one shots

Hey, the chaptr was reely kool..pls do continue it, i cant wait to see wats comin up nxt!

SashaWPevensie :D

awe! I hope you write more

more more more more!
i want to read more! don't make it a one shot! you could keep going from there!
feel free to check out my Caspian/Susan fic

naw...that was so cute!

sweet and fluffy! it seems suspian fluff is ur calling. keep on writing! i feel all warm and tingly. :)

Very sweet one-shot. ^_^ I hope we get to see those little flirting moments between Caspian and Susan on the DVD's deleted scenes.

aww! so cute!