Interesting. I think you got Jacob's character very nicely. Please update soon

Nice

So is Jacob a werewolf? Did Edward go to Italy too? Are you going to continue this story? Great Job so far.

This is a really great story - fun and original but true to the characters. I really liked the picnic lunch rabbit, too. I hope you continue with it eventually, because it could get really interesting.

It's a shame this story hasn't been updated in some time-it certainly has a lot of promise, I think. It's an interesting concept, to be sure-what if Bella had changed? I for one would like to know more.

Of course, I do wonder how Jake would know. Assuming this disregards New Moon and Eclipse, I would imagine that he would still think of the legends as fictional tales. Nevertheless, it's very good. As I said, I hope that you might write more. You are a wonderful author, and it would be a shame to let this work go to waste.

nice

AWESOME!

Going great. I am thouroughly enjoying this. Hope you update soon. x

George

This takes place one year after Bella was tracked by James. And yes, she was changed because of/by James. There will be more details to follow.

Amazing chap- your writing is amazing and I love the story idea. One question though- when does this take place? And Bella was changed because of James, right? Just checking... update soon ;)

Nice chapter!

Keep it up!

OMC- I love this! I absolutely cannot wait to read more! Please update soon- this is another one of your amazing stories, and I cant wait to find out more about whats going on! ;)

It sounds great. But can you give us a little background info soon? I am slightly confused as to what has happened so far. Can't wait for another chapter.

George

so she's a vampire now? sweet! answer this for me plez!keep going. good. hehe