Its short, simple, and to the point. I like it! I like it then a lot of other stuff on here. I don't read too much fan fiction but when I do, I like a story that is unique to the universe that it takes part in. I like original ideas.

Sure, I could point out that some of the characters are not as developed as they should be and that some of the action is far too fast but for a story like this, the pace is perfect. Who cares about some of the humans anyway, I want more stuff with the creatures and that is exactly what you produced here.

Not to mention, I can read a real flare in your writing. You seem to really care about this story and I hope to see more because this just seems like, if you'll pardon the pun, a ball of fun!

Here's an idea. When the Critters attack the town, Gizmo purposely spawns an army of gremlins to stopp them. PM me to tell me how you like it.

Chapter 3 is on it's way? When?

(Critters scare me. I'm on Team Gremlins)

Yes, someone IS reading this and that same someone is wondering when you will update this next! I just saw all of the Critters movies (creepy little bastards) and I wanna see them get murdered by Gremlins! Whoo! Bring on the bloodlust!

What happens next?

O-o more more please!

Dude! Plzz update! Love the story, need to hear more!

dude... you didnt finish it! what the hell man? you had me all worked up with the title and then the story... come on dude.

It's very good, I like how descriptive you put it. I hope you make more

Oh dude, this is AWESOME! Please continue! D

Very good, I like your writing style. Hope you find a good way to bring the problem of sunlight against the gremlins, but for the critters, into the story. Please, R&R my story when you get the chance, nobody has reviewed it yet. I need some constructive criticism.