 Mrs. James Norrington 2008-11-15 . chapter 1*Falls down and worships you* That was simply lovely...one of the most beautiful PotO fics I have ever read. It's nice to see someone who can write R/C like this--poor, underappreciated Raoul! :-) |
 Oakheart 2008-10-02 . chapter 1This was great! Very well written with excellent descriptions! I think the first half was my favorite, when they were little kids. That was so sweet! |
 phantomgirl110 2008-09-21 . chapter 1This story made me SQUE so much; I can't believe I've never read it before! I really loved everything about it. They were both totally in character, it was well-written and bittersweet and completely adorable. And I have no idea why, but the image of a little Raoul sitting in the attic looking at a book about ships may be the cutest thing I've ever heard of. |
 ajkldfs 2008-08-22 . chapter 1aw.
i love them together.
:DD |
 Llandaf 2008-07-08 . chapter 1Nice one shot. I think this is a good place to end this little tale. It was very sweet and gives us an idea of what Christine's and Roul's childhoods were like when they were together.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.
Llandaf |
 The Duelist's Heiress 2008-07-06 . chapter 1That was beautiful. I really liked it. Outstanding. I got so teary reading it. When I get like that, or experience any emotion after reading a story, the author has done their job to the fullest. Thank you for writing this amazing portrayal of the Raoul & Christine relationship.
TDH |
 Truth Questor 2008-07-04 . chapter 1How old are they supposed to be in the first part?
Nice emotion. Raoul/Christine forever! |
 Crystal Rose of Pollux 2008-07-03 . chapter 1Aww, this is so adorable! I love the connection of the handkerchief (and how Raoul and Christine kissed both times).
The descriptions were very vivid and poignant. And I loved the ending line, too! |
 PhantomBialystock 2008-07-03 . chapter 1Aww! This is so sweet! I love R/C fics, but there are so few out there compared to E/C fics. Yours is really good and really well written! :D |
 Mareh Sue 2008-07-02 . chapter 1 Daww, fuzzies. :3
You know I'm still a bit put off by the Chandelier dropping in the musical. Even as pissy and possibly deranged as he is at the end of AIOY, I still can't see him being able to try and kill her. Or maybe he assumed she'd run away in time and not stand like a deer in the headlights, idunno. Anytime I think of the scene I have to wonder what would have happened if it had in fact bopped her in the head. |
 jennyfair 2008-07-02 . chapter 1Aww, bee, I loff it :wub: I think you incorporated the prompt very well--I like the echoing sentiments at the end of each half, and how you use them to reflect how R/C have changed as well as stayed the same (like the handkerchief being crumpled when Raoul's a boy and neatly folded when he's a man). I think it's brill :) I'm glad you finished and posted! |