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You are just too awesome! Love it and with Cloud lol wonderful! I'll be waiting for your update.

So its true, Cloud IS im everything. This was nice, short but sweet.

Yey and update and with Cloud! *Drools*

I loved the part when they talked about some being 'watching over them and writing about what's about to happen' LOL!

Just a minor mistake,

"the pizza is mine, keep the chance."

It should be, "The pizza is mine, keep the change"

over-all it's a good update! Keep it up!

O.O...I...Love...It...You've just brightened my day considerably! Thanks! .

lol... maybe not as comical as the other chapters, but well done nonetheless.

Haha! This one made me laugh! :D I really liked story one, I kinda figured that it would be Cloud, not so much in story 2 since I haven't played Harvest Moon yet. I actually would've wanted to read more if you focused it on FF, but if you do post a 3rd story, I'll read it :D Hey, not bad :D

The mercenary fic is a good idea but it could have been even longer so it would be even more awesome.

LOL... Dante got pwnt by a farmer!

Oh my god. That was absolutely brilliant. And not just because you had Dante meet Cloud, which is a friggen' awesome idea. But dear god... that was awesome. Absolutely awesome, no alliteration intended. I swear, I'm laughing so hard I'm tearing up. That was brilliant. For many reasons, the main one being, of course that you had Dante so completely stunned... though I do wonder who Dante was talking to.

heh... now that was funny.

lol a mercenary, dante finally had to pay up,trapped by his own word.

This isn't a bad idea but it's kind of short...I actually smirked a little at who said mercenary was but it might have to do with seeing a few "Cloud/Sephiroth/Zack/Marlene versus Dante!" topics a while back.

Small critic I have though is that it's hard to tell who the other speaker is (Trish? Lady? Patty even?) plus I would have seen more of an interaction with Cloud or even with the other speaker rather than just a simple "here you go".

Acerbus Wings

LOL. That's funny. Good job.