|Reviews for Pizza Mercenary|
| TurtleFeathers 3/20/09 . chapter 3
| Prisonerksc2-303 11/9/08 . chapter 3
You are just too awesome! Love it and with Cloud lol wonderful! I'll be waiting for your update.
| Silent Deathbringer 10/29/08 . chapter 1
So its true, Cloud IS im everything. This was nice, short but sweet.
| Lady-von-Strife 10/26/08 . chapter 3
Yey and update and with Cloud! *Drools*
I loved the part when they talked about some being 'watching over them and writing about what's about to happen' LOL!
Just a minor mistake,
"the pizza is mine, keep the chance."
It should be, "The pizza is mine, keep the change"
over-all it's a good update! Keep it up!
| ShibukisSummoner 10/26/08 . chapter 3
O.O...I...Love...It...You've just brightened my day considerably! Thanks! .
| Eric Draven201 10/25/08 . chapter 3
lol... maybe not as comical as the other chapters, but well done nonetheless.
| Lady-von-Strife 10/24/08 . chapter 1
Haha! This one made me laugh! :D I really liked story one, I kinda figured that it would be Cloud, not so much in story 2 since I haven't played Harvest Moon yet. I actually would've wanted to read more if you focused it on FF, but if you do post a 3rd story, I'll read it :D Hey, not bad :D
| Maximatum99 10/19/08 . chapter 2
The mercenary fic is a good idea but it could have been even longer so it would be even more awesome.
| Eric Draven201 10/18/08 . chapter 2
LOL... Dante got pwnt by a farmer!
| Withdrawn 7/17/08 . chapter 1
Oh my god. That was absolutely brilliant. And not just because you had Dante meet Cloud, which is a friggen' awesome idea. But dear god... that was awesome. Absolutely awesome, no alliteration intended. I swear, I'm laughing so hard I'm tearing up. That was brilliant. For many reasons, the main one being, of course that you had Dante so completely stunned... though I do wonder who Dante was talking to.
| Eric Draven201 7/6/08 . chapter 1
heh... now that was funny.
| amaitoru 7/5/08 . chapter 1
lol a mercenary, dante finally had to pay up,trapped by his own word.
| Acerbus Wings 7/2/08 . chapter 1
This isn't a bad idea but it's kind of short...I actually smirked a little at who said mercenary was but it might have to do with seeing a few "Cloud/Sephiroth/Zack/Marlene versus Dante!" topics a while back.
Small critic I have though is that it's hard to tell who the other speaker is (Trish? Lady? Patty even?) plus I would have seen more of an interaction with Cloud or even with the other speaker rather than just a simple "here you go".
| Bloom Flower 7/2/08 . chapter 1
LOL. That's funny. Good job.