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| dixiedelight270 2008-08-03 ch 1, | abuseoh my...very good. please feel free to elaborate. |
| istappen 2008-07-30 ch 1, | abuseIt's so cute! I love it :) |
| theTwilightLamb 2008-07-29 ch 1, | abuseaw, so sweet. |
| LC the Cow 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuseI love this. I think the fact that's so short just adds to the imagery of the whole story. I think it's good. Short, sweet, and to the Point |
| Lalaith Yamainu 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuseAw... |
| andygc469 2008-07-10 ch 1, | abusei love the story but its so short |
| HinataMorningstar 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abusesweet |
| JoeBob1379 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseOh, I like that! The style was great, I loved the repetition and change of emphasis. Well done! |
| jaspersgirl214 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseomg! This is such a good story! I love it~ |
| Eva Angel 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuseThis was cute. :D |
| Ragh Aku 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abusewhile this is canon it's really refreshing to read a different pairing other than bellaxedward. not that i don't love them cuz I do. still... refreshing. but it is so short! |
| OMEIloveEdwardCullen 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abusewow this is really good... i really like even though its short. nice job... got any more stories?? |