 Dunkan4ever 2008-08-05 . chapter 7i loved it!
OMG! they had 3 pups!
yay!
just picturing the way you discribed Sesshomaru's and Kagome's pup's in this chapture are the cutest babies EVER!...or pup's...
now you got me really wanting to know what will happen next, and i can already tell that when you complet this story, i'm gonna be sad that's it's over.
update soon!
i can't wait! |
 XxBloodyRiverxX 2008-08-05 . chapter 7Yeah!, this was really good, and it was good that you didn't go into detail about the birthing, most people do not want to read stuff like that, I cannot wait to read the next chapter, how about, since they are technically pup's, have a time skip for about 2-3 weeks, when pups are supposed to start walking, I can only imagine the trouble they will get in, oh, no atter how much I love and worship wolves, Sessy-Sama is a dog, not a wolf. Oh, and if you need any help with raising the pups in your story, you can ask me for advice, my dog, before I had to give her up, she had had EIGHT puppies, and she WAS half wolf, and so were her puppies, the other half was siberian husky, man they were so kawaii, they weren't so kawaii though when they got into everything, well, gotta go, staying at a friends house for the night and this may be my last chance on the computer for a while, though I may be able to get on hers, well, JYA! and don't forget my offer. |
 Dunkan4ever 2008-08-04 . chapter 6writhers block:what ever!
i thought it was a good chapter!
nice twist haveing Sesshomaru helping Kagome's mom out in the kichin(in his time, he would never do that)
and an even nicer twist of having Kagome's friends turning on her and calling her a stipper, and Sesshomaru defending Kagome, it shows how much he cares for her.
anyway, it was a great chapter and i can't wait tell the next one to come up!
plz update soon! |